EAger to Offend
on water falls by Bill Z Bub
2 Oct 2003, 9:49 PM
I agree with p&k aboout the poem AND the Sens!! I feel decieved, Bill. This was written like a Leafs fan: strong for two periods but surrendering to the curse in the end.
Best of luck in this new season of hockey and poetry. I fear you may need it.
Yours Truly
A Concerned Fan
I meant down not ten, I'm drunk.
I did, a few times, here's one, and it was #1 for some time, though I did not think it worthy and took it ten.
http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?i
Perhaps, perhaps, but don't you think it's worth more than a stinkin' five?
Peace, eh.
Grazie, signora.
Tell me about it. Everytime I read the part with the hose I just giggle again profusely.
I am far from learned, so I cannot offer much critique. Here is a ten.
Cutting edge, dude.
Great concept and style. I love the message behind your words.
Very thought provoking. I like your style.
Lovely. And such original thinking to go along with it.
You must be Native American.What Occasion may I ask?
As are you with this. You know, someone likes giving bunches of those anonymous 0's also. Write one for those cowards.
A lovely piece through and through. Bravo, Tesoro.
I guess he wasn't talking about who I thought he was talking about.
I just play right into your hands don't I?
You fiend.
go avs? Ahem.
GO AVS!!!!
Wrong again, mr. smartypants. I drink Duckstein now. Best. Beer. Ever.
I think I can handle heavier critiquing on some things. Care to offer?
Are you writing better stuff these days or just odes to GW?
my bad.