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Bill Z Bub replying on Gone missing by INTRANSIT 2 Oct 2003, 8:24 PM
No, that would be the cabbage engine, not the babbage engine.
poetandknowit replying on water falls by Bill Z Bub 2 Oct 2003, 8:23 PM
And Molson.
INTRANSIT replying on Gone missing by INTRANSIT 2 Oct 2003, 8:23 PM
well that explains alot. why is it you never seem to show up when I'm writing better stuff?
poetandknowit replying on water falls by Bill Z Bub 2 Oct 2003, 8:23 PM
Go Senators!
is there an echo in here?
poetandknowit replying on Gone missing by INTRANSIT 2 Oct 2003, 8:21 PM
No Z is on a business trip, but not really. She is acting as a middle man (or woman in this case) on a huge opium deal that is going down on the mean streets of south Savannah. I am meeting her for lunch tomorrow in Atlanta. Then we are going to get a room and fuck away the afternoon. I cannot wait. GW was recently kicked out of the country and is living on a small Island off the coast of Ecuador with a gimpy beach boy. As far as Z goes, if she cared at all she would find and Internet café and utilize the advantages 1) of the community gathering, especially listening to young Swedish girls clamoring in their hard boiled language about the weather outside of Amsterdam and 2) utilize modems that actually work.
Bill Z Bub replying on water falls by Bill Z Bub 2 Oct 2003, 8:18 PM
I wouldn't say it was easy, and no I cannot teach you how to do anything. I run on pure instinct.
Bill Z Bub replying on water falls by Bill Z Bub 2 Oct 2003, 8:16 PM
Go Leafs!
poetandknowit on water falls by Bill Z Bub 2 Oct 2003, 8:14 PM
Awwwwwwwwwllllllllllll. Better hit the spank bank until then, eh? As far as the poem goes, for all of the underlying meaning to the intended, the first part sets up a great image and the slowly the poem falls apart as you leave that image and go a meandering. Puppy love will do that sort of thing to a poet. Especially a Canadian poet.
INTRANSIT replying on Gone missing by INTRANSIT 2 Oct 2003, 8:14 PM
from the inventor of the Kale gun. no doubt.
INTRANSIT replying on Gone missing by INTRANSIT 2 Oct 2003, 8:13 PM
I suppose there's no hiding it now eh? howaya howaya howaya?
Bill Z Bub replying on Gone missing by INTRANSIT 2 Oct 2003, 8:11 PM
If you're talking about who I THINK you're talking about, she on a little business trip, and is apparently using a steam powered babbage engine as an internet connection, if I can judge by its sp ee d.
poetandknowit on Gone missing by INTRANSIT 2 Oct 2003, 8:11 PM
Pervert.
INTRANSIT on water falls by Bill Z Bub 2 Oct 2003, 8:11 PM
can you teach me how to do that? It is sooo terribly missing from my poetry. much better sitting this way it is it is. 9.5 because this was easy for you.
INTRANSIT replying on Gone missing by INTRANSIT 2 Oct 2003, 8:07 PM
GAH! I can't believe I did that!!! excuse me while i flog myself repeatedly with a garage door spring. fixed. where is she, anyway?
Bill Z Bub on angst by nentwined 2 Oct 2003, 7:55 PM
Yup.
Bill Z Bub on Gone missing by INTRANSIT 2 Oct 2003, 7:37 PM
first line good second line, did you mean decent? third line... er, oooookay... if you say so...?
horus8 replying on I am an genius, and you're a stupid turd by Shardik 2 Oct 2003, 7:14 PM
Why would you be hugging me? because I am an FANTASTICAL POEAT?
horus8 replying on I am an genius, and you're a stupid turd by Shardik 2 Oct 2003, 7:13 PM
More of a testimony I believe.
horus8 replying on The rock star and the ATM by Shardik 2 Oct 2003, 7:10 PM
Why?