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Garrett S Sexton on Alone by Artemis745 15 Sep 2003, 2:21 PM

I smell pixies. GOOD 5

Garrett S Sexton on empty by timvick473662003 15 Sep 2003, 2:17 PM

Pixie poems. I love em {no-one writes about pixies anymore} well done 10

nentwined on The Last Stop by Quiet-Ralph 15 Sep 2003, 2:13 PM

a quaint viewpoint, but could be more powerfully presented. maybe if you gave examples of how you did nothing? also (for my taste) could use a bit more flow... or punctuation... or something. reads choppily.

nentwined replying on My nails are in love with your chalkboard by Jeremi B. Handrinos 15 Sep 2003, 2:12 PM

16. rinse, repeat.

nentwined on levered 'n loved by A. Nomaly 15 Sep 2003, 2:11 PM

hmm. ?

Jeremi B. Handrinos replying on My nails are in love with your chalkboard by Jeremi B. Handrinos 15 Sep 2003, 12:32 PM

Shit, you should see my turd cutter ode.

Jeremi B. Handrinos replying on My nails are in love with your chalkboard by Jeremi B. Handrinos 15 Sep 2003, 12:30 PM

I appologize that you had to see me get angry like this, but no one takes food out of my son's mouth, blows me off, and then on top of it all has the nerve to judge me a whore. Especially, when they themselves have no room to talk. I always wondered why she would hang around my house and talk to me more when me and my girlfriend would be fighting. God's wife is a divider, and an angler, more interested in the uninteresting world of desperate Succubus power plays and fucking, than friendship. Real friends don't angle for the mundane.

Jeremi B. Handrinos replying on My nails are in love with your chalkboard by Jeremi B. Handrinos 15 Sep 2003, 12:17 PM

And I believe you.

A. Nomaly on Rounding the corners by Jeremi B. Handrinos 15 Sep 2003, 12:05 PM

walking through hallways of protuding corners/ jettison the right angles

Jeremi B. Handrinos replying on My nails are in love with your chalkboard by Jeremi B. Handrinos 15 Sep 2003, 12:02 PM

15. More green hair dye, less mid life crisis.

<~> on The Killing Festival Anthem by William Delacroix 15 Sep 2003, 11:23 AM

my NEH-EH-AME is z, and this ain't me.

GeschÃ¤ftsreise on playing the scratching game by nentwined 15 Sep 2003, 11:02 AM

But if I scratch off too many I won't win the free medium drink!

<~> replying on Plastic is Forever by http://mulberryfairy 15 Sep 2003, 10:59 AM

very. and plastcized, is a word, per dictionary.com: plasÂ·tiÂ·cize ( P ) Pronunciation Key (plst-sz) tr. & intr.v. plasÂ·tiÂ·cized, plasÂ·tiÂ·cizÂ·ing, plasÂ·tiÂ·cizÂ·es To make or become plastic

http://mulberryfairy on tRuNdLe WhEeL by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 15 Sep 2003, 10:23 AM

callipers is not in my dictionary, so I must agree with Dark Angel. Cute though. "Hum dum dee dum, dum dum dee dum, I'm so rumbly in my tumbly."

http://mulberryfairy on playing the scratching game by nentwined 15 Sep 2003, 10:19 AM

Your comments are so constructive and thorough, you DO deserve comments in return.

http://mulberryfairy on A Night Nurse by The_Third_Isis 15 Sep 2003, 10:17 AM

hypos- hippos. I liked the play on the word pray/prey. The rhyme at the beginning made it seem cornier than you might have intended.

http://mulberryfairy on sitting at the cliff's edge by nentwined 15 Sep 2003, 10:12 AM

Beautiful, you made the repitition so meaningful and lyric. This line "clinging us each tighter to the other" was a little awkward, could do without the "us", I think- or possibly replace w/ "clinging each of us tighter to the other". 10

http://mulberryfairy on My nails are in love with your chalkboard by Jeremi B. Handrinos 15 Sep 2003, 10:04 AM

I could think of lower forms of whoring.

A. Nomaly on My nails are in love with your chalkboard by Jeremi B. Handrinos 15 Sep 2003, 9:54 AM

quite poetic

?-Dave_Mysterious-? replying on THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? 15 Sep 2003, 9:50 AM

You can never have too much time for poetry.