suprembeaner
on The Gentleman by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
13 Sep 2003, 4:25 AM
and i give you a 10.
as should a gentalmen.
3char1per
you are the leader of male homosexual poetry.
good job.
peniscabob.
3char1per
o.
truthfully this is probly the worst poem
i have seen of you
try harder.
truthfully this is probly the worst poem
i have seen of you
try harder.
NO, you listen god im not horus8
but you can worship me if you want.
im his young brother who has a fasanation with crustations.
3char1per
YOU ARE HORUS!!!!! HORUS!!!! HORUS!!!!!
HAIL LORD BACHUS!!!!
HAIL KING SHARDIK!!!!
WOOO!
lol. bonkers.
just playing around
your a great poet.
Child. I love a good trailer-park. No I won't ovulate for your mother anymore than I would give the tribe up for bread. I've been told a tale or 2.
I like it. It really made me think. Took me in, put me there. I saw the images, feel the feelings. Keep up the good work.
I'd give more than 10 if I could.
sorry I just begain
my poem writing coquest
check my poems out on
grendal, baphomet, suprembeaner(a tribute to supremedremer)
hahaha...3char1per
darktri
3chars1per
Short and direct to the point giving total view poems aren't always the best. I'll agree with you there. Not taking anything from the shorter poem writers I've seen some very good ones. Its just not my style or my favor read.
Any suggestions how to make it better?
super tiz
3char1per
Thank you very much. I got the idea when I signed up for this site. Decided what I wanted my user name to be, then thought hey... Why don't I write a poem about the mute amongst society.
Again thanks for the comment and the vote.
TheVoiceless
on Slimshady Meets Cali Hillbilly (I Don An Afro) by SupremeDreamer
13 Sep 2003, 1:20 AM
It was a fun read man. Looks like you had to have had a blast writing it. One of those that you sat there forever to write? Little by little, reading over, changing. Looking at the screen cockeyed wondering if it makes any sense.
Being messed up helps you write at times doesn't it?
TheVoiceless
on Slimshady Meets Cali Hillbilly (I Don An Afro) by SupremeDreamer
13 Sep 2003, 1:20 AM
It was a fun read man. Looks like you had to have had a blast writing it. One of those that you sat there forever to write? Little by little, reading over, changing. Looking at the screen cockeyed wondering if it makes any sense.
Being messed up helps you write at times doesn't it?
the mute one was beter
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3char1per
we ar the knights who say ni.
very good yng chap.
10
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3char1per
Let me explain one time,
The only sound I break is toot, toot, toot,
So don't make fun trying to be cute,
Or your brain from skull I will lute.
(Look I'm a poet and didn't know it too.)
Thanks for the comment had to give a little back towards ya.
twitterly goog
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3char1per