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EAger to Offend on pErFeCt pAiN by William Delacroix 8 Sep 2003, 6:56 AM
Ah. An unfermented wine with a sweet finish. Now that's a twist. See "Bach and Hollywood's bad guys" by Scott Timberg Los Angeles Times (reprinted in the Vancouver Sun Tuesday, August 26, 2003. I knew I had that article hangin' around. I hope it serves you.
EAger to Offend on (untitled) by http://bandgeek 8 Sep 2003, 6:46 AM
This is decent. It could use a little tightening. Even though I want to read a more expressive description, this stark treatment is likely most appropriate.
?-Dave_Mysterious-? on The empty room by INTRANSIT 8 Sep 2003, 6:35 AM
Jesus is omniscient, and therefore would have to know the answer to the question "Jesus? what is wrong?". The logical inconsistency makes it hard to believe this is actually Jesus. Is it supposed to be a Jesus impersonator or imposter of some sort?
William Delacroix replying on pErFeCt pAiN by William Delacroix 8 Sep 2003, 6:34 AM
It's Japanese: "Blood washes tears away." Can't say I've read the article, but I think Bach goes well with violence, since he's so unpredictable; he'll be all calm and serene one moment, then get carried away like a maniac. I wonder if he was bipolar. PS: I like the name.
EAger to Offend on pErFeCt pAiN by William Delacroix 8 Sep 2003, 6:25 AM
I read an article recently about the use of Bach as accompaniment to violent imagery in films. Did you see that too? I like the burning sculpure idea and would like more details of that. Might I suggest a guilotine for the hands. I have to reserve my vote until you tell me what that last line means (and what language it is). I only speak English and only just barely.
It's too bad this is on the Worst List but, if it wasn't I probably never would have had the pleasure to stumble across it.
nentwined replying on plagiarism txt by daniella 8 Sep 2003, 6:05 AM
I find it a very interesting phenomenon, myself. :)
Nein, sie hat eine gepachtshliessfacher.
EAger to Offend on Self Portrait by http://bandgeek 7 Sep 2003, 11:34 PM
It's vivid, I'll give you that.
Bill Z Bub replying on canto di desiderio by Bill Z Bub 7 Sep 2003, 10:10 PM
Il gioco ha regole, io vede. Giochero con il vostro metodo. Per ora.
Geschäftsreise on canto di desiderio by Bill Z Bub 7 Sep 2003, 9:59 PM
Credo che dovrte rimuovere la traduzione. Coloro che non capisce che l'italiano sarà costretto per soffrire la nebbia di babelfish e coloro che capisce l'italiano riterranno lo scopo progettato. Forse è migliore senza la traduzione (ma molto elegante)
daniella replying on plagiarism txt by daniella 7 Sep 2003, 9:14 PM
just love how submits become forums for discord and discourse.
Bill Z Bub replying on missing time (revised) by Bill Z Bub 7 Sep 2003, 7:33 PM
Signore, all I did was adjust the spacing. But point well taken.
Bill Z Bub on The empty room by INTRANSIT 7 Sep 2003, 7:21 PM
Changing comes to stays makes all the difference. Brava, signore! (Forget babelfish, I'm learning Italiano)
nentwined replying on plagiarism txt by daniella 7 Sep 2003, 5:30 PM
As Saint HAL would say, "Calm down, Dave. Dave. Dave, calm down. Why don't you take a stress pill and think things over?"
Eu sei exatamente a parcela do livro que você está consultando a...
exactement. parlé avec l'esprit vrai.
und Ihre Mutter nicht?
Ich bin nicht skrupulös, irgendwelche dieser Umhänge zu behaupten.