Indeed

Spelling, please. I myself am agnostic but I'm not going to trash you just because you believe in some religion. What I will say is that (on this site at least) you should expect to be ridiculed. This ridicule will occur for three reasons: your style is abecedarian, you do not check your spelling, and your thoughts will be considered naive or at least unoriginal. If you are trying to perfect the 'praise'. That is to say if your real intent is to bring glory to some ideal you have, you are really going to have to work harder. You can't just say majesty, you have to make people feel it. It honestly makes me wonder whether you believe in god less than I do.

It certainly is an ace poeme. I really like the use of "dying" to rhyme with "crying"! But hey I have a question about Christ. If lots of people pray for something, is Jesu more likely to answer the prayer than if only one person prays? Thanks!

i like your poem, its good to see people write about God

i like your poem, but should we aim for purgatory? if we do we surely won't make it, aim for Heaven, i give it an 8 though, better than i can write

A finely crafted poem.

I love the imagery here. I really felt this one. Was the desire to have something delicious all to yourself?

I liked your statement "I guess that was that," but I want to know more. What else were you feeling? Relief that it was over? Not wanting it to be over?

No offense, but is remorselessly a word? One question: are you in love?

This poem was written at 5:37 PM on Monday, September 2, 2002.

This poem was written late Fall 2001.

This poem was written Fall 2001.

This poem was written Christmas 2001.

See, that's much better.

genius.. kiddo, your poetry does not look like the work of brilliance, and weed certainly wont help.