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SupremeDreamer replying on Untitled II by greym0on 1 Sep 2003, 9:38 AM
worry not, i am a preacher screaming to any that make me feel the need to speak.. i speak, at times not caring what i say, which is most of the time.. for it matters not.
Awesome. I liked the repetition and the flow of the poem and the precise descriptions.
http://mulberryfairy on Nothing by greym0on 1 Sep 2003, 8:59 AM
At least this unrequited love is good fuel for poetry.
http://mulberryfairy on Untitled II by greym0on 1 Sep 2003, 8:56 AM
"Your arms that were just long enough to wrap around me" - this didn't quite work for me, made me think that this love of your was a small child. It is a good thing I am in a dramatic & romatic mood today- 9
http://mulberryfairy on Untitled by greym0on 1 Sep 2003, 8:51 AM
beautiful, even if it is overly gushy.
I disagree, onion breath is sexy. Especially the onion breath one can't get rid of after they brush their teeth, all the other bad breath gone, and just that current of garlicy onion remains. I would accept Eve's onion-y temptation, even if it meant being expelled from Paradise.
http://mulberryfairy on Shi by William Delacroix 1 Sep 2003, 8:39 AM
What a waste of your recyclable organs, to publish the product on poemranker, where all poems, even the worst of them, are underappreciated. Anyway, I think it was a great poem- but wouldn't kill myself for its writing. 10
Beautiful. I like "buzzing mass of fickle need". But then, I'm fickle.
SupremeDreamer on Untitled II by greym0on 1 Sep 2003, 8:05 AM
you poke at things you have no insight into. you think you can jab at this? speaking of chaos, dreams, and poor therapy insight spouting the widely known: "mommy if i was loved i wouldnt be like this" Hah. wow. your rusty, and im very motivated. tsk. im also.. CRAZY! im such a bundle of emotions just waiting to burst! hahahaha.
SupremeDreamer on Untitled by greym0on 1 Sep 2003, 8:00 AM
not good.. tsk. skimming the surface.. DRIVE THE KNIFE DEEP YOU STOMACHLESS WHORE...
I spit. I pop. I rot. I cause thee to cry, and soon the fumes of my evil peeled layers shall kill thee. i smell someone who hides behind the moon, i smell a goon that wants to play a game i love.. or perhaps i smell blood that has not been spilled yet.. shall this veggie taste thy blood.. shall it flow as a large watercourse, or drain via the carved delta? -sniff- my teeth ache for flesh..
Don-Quixote on Danuta by deep-as-a-puddle 1 Sep 2003, 6:48 AM
-Think happy thoughts johnnie- can you get any cuter? 4
Don-Quixote on Shi by William Delacroix 1 Sep 2003, 6:46 AM
ok ok, nice detail, nice twisted humor with the introduction of the wife.. but i still think its a failed poet glorifying his shame that resulted in suicide lol.. and how the fuck does he accomplish making an impact? i can imagine headlines: "Crazy Poet Slices Stomach To End His Hunger." that doesnt make an impact.. it makes parents scared when their child comes out of his/her room and says "i want to be a poet mommy and daddy!" in the morning right after they read the headline. "Be a lawyer honey" despite that, this poem deserves an 8 in my opinion, doesnt get a 9 because of the so called purpose of the poets bloody and painfull suicide.
I really like parts of this. I've never been to Ohio, but it sounds interesting. It's good to see people attempting social commentary, particularly in such an obtuse way. The second verse, which is more about the narrator, isn't as striking as the first.
Nicholas Jones on Why Stay? by LuckyJoe 1 Sep 2003, 5:51 AM
Interesting. Are the numerous grammatical errors an attempt at capturing the mindset of an inarticulate character, or can you just not type properly. I like the rousing ending.
Y2kSlamPoet on Wit and Eloquence by Lifeboatman 1 Sep 2003, 3:36 AM
Well, now that the space is gone, it flashed light a big surprise into my face!! good! the effect is much better. Good work on the ascii drawing this time.. not as good as one of settles masterpieces, but its no longer "crappy". 8!
"If Eve had tempted Adam With you - Instead of a paltry Apple... We would still be roaming Paradise" and smelling his bad breath... i think my plum idea is a better one.. ;/ blessed with 7.
Impersonation of Dark-Angel: Abdulla, this is clearly you saving your ass. Because a logical explaination has been given to provide the reason why dark angel does not do what a psychologist does, which shows why he cannot be called as such. It is also providing an excuse for dark-angel not to respond, which shows that you might actually be dark-angel in disguise. You cannot risk the possibility of revealing the fact that dark-angel is a bad actor, who couldn't provide actual professional therapy to anyone in need of it what so ever. This fact also shows his lack of intelligence, and how unstudied he is in REAL behavioristic psychology. ------ See, i can do it too! but i think i left out the part that says "its all a way of showing that dark-angel has no need to explain, its a sign of denial" Etc etc. A GOOD BULLSHITTER. perfectly suited to be a politician i think, he can talk, he sure can.. but can he say anything of real substance, that remains to be seen.
flimsy? Whats incorrect in my logic exactly? hrmm? I consider Dark-Angel unqualified in medical matters.. Thats all, simply one person, and it has nothing to do with my view of detectives. I find his methodes of pseudo psychoanalysis to be crude.. It reminds me of the cliche therapy responses i see made by bad actors in crappy movie productions. Nothing is ever what it is.. hrmm.. its always just me "hiding my inner emotions". Yes.. i cannot reveal the truth that i have been UTTERLY CRUSHED by his remarks!!! i am emotionally traumatized and suffer a case of extreme denial, unable to cope with the realities. Yes yes yes.. i could pay someone 10 bucks to tell me that.. i could do this wonderful "acting" myself and save myself 10 dollars. P-R-E-D-I-C-T-A-B-L-E isnt it?.. see, your comment saved Darkie the finger work of providing his response.. i even said this response for him in a simplier fashion in the official explaination: "detective im sure you will find some unknown clue to the secret "truth" to my "fabricated" response made to perhaps do damage control or what ever.." END OF STORY. Ofcourse, id like him to offer his take on my logic concerning why he can't be called a doctor, where i excluded my personal feeling towards him. I'm curiouse.
Note to -=Dark_Angel=- Dear sir, Please do not respond to Y2kSlamPoete's latest flimsy post. It's blatantly obvious that he's a shameless liar. We all know he made the mistake of calling you "Detective" Watson as a result of his crippling ignorance. It is very obvious that he is attempting to cover up for his error by posting this rambling self-justificatory missive, the gist of which is that he *deliberately* called you "Detective" Watson because the word "Doctor" was singularly inappropriate for someone unqualified in medical matters. He's so transparent in his clumsy manoeuvring and so patently dim-witted in the execution of his designs that you are saved the task of pointing out his numerous glaring errors. Yours &c. Abdullah x x x x x