what you think?

have a look at mine. 8

Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall, taking head from his best friend Horus Humpty Dumpty fell off the wall, onto the bed of this stud Horus Humpty Dumpty was not on top,to that job he left two inch Horus Humpty Dumpty wanted more, he was not satisfied Humpty Dumpty was adament, he wanted a larger cock inside Good old Horus, homo Horus, homo Horus cried He cried all day, he wanked all night He wanked until his dick was red and white A year to the day, since Horus cried It was to me that Homo Horus did confide 'I'm so pissed off, I want a cock that's 18 long and 18 wide I want the lads to fear the cock, And say that I Horus, truly, am, the best ride' I'm sorry Horus, I had to say, Unlike you, I'm not gay In my opinion, it would work the best If you killed yourself, you fucking pest!

casual poetry, or casual sex? let me guess

Good imagination. Kinda small for a superhero though

good old horus eight he has anal sex with his mate once his friend is at the end good old homo just says 'bend' my friend horus eight loves to masturbate he spends his day, lookin gay wating to fuck his mate

wow your poems are really good.

ha ha aha you have a bad head.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh yes heres some krptosmurf

This is one ribbed turd

Very good. It set off my turrets. I like the way it flows. I enjoyed every word. I can't stand poems that have lots of filler. People concentrate too much on an attractive presentation and end up putting too much pen to paper. (10)

not bad, groovy crescendo. 7

I like this one I hope you don't die I hope you see the grinning monkey That's hiding on your back Tell him to fuck off He's got the wrong guy (8)