dont feel bad, like i said man, i wasnt talking out my ass when i said my heads buried in a dictionary studying variouse words, etc. When dark angel decided to flap with toothless lil grin about my spelling and such, i made it a goal of mine to outdo his dictionary fairy knowledge.. im pretty good at it now, course im still workin with it.

Just keep in mind that i do have three nicks.. (just want to get that out of the way so theres no confusion, course i can always switch and let me "alter ego" confirm it..) less scary? fear isnt an emotion i bother with, so it dont make a difference. ;P btw, whats your take on Pina Colada Belle?

the second connotation more relevant and powerful than the first. It is up to the reader, and I failed this simple test

Stooped: 1: Bend one's back forward from the waist on down 2: Debase oneself morally, act in an undignified, unworthy, or dishonorable way <- this really gives a nice touch.. :) 5: Carry oneself, often habitually, with head, shoulders, and upper back bent forward. 3/4 was about sagging and descending quickly.. I think stooped worked well, in all respects, course i wouldnt mind a thought from you concerning what you would have chosen. ah, leaves, well.. fuck, i could say foliage! inspiration. thanks for pointing that one out, i made a revision to my computer copy. I could also change the first leave into left. a minor bump. and, i dont think any poem stands unmoved..either the poet moves it or- remembering my boring earth science classes, water makes stone turn into sand, its just a matter of time (depending on your opinion concering time anyway.) Dont worry about being wrong or whatever, i dont mind nitpicks at my stuff, i goto places other than here ya know, and i get people rewriting it in wierd ways saying "This will work better, and blah blah..." but its not that bad, it actually helps, depending on the critic. anyway, enjoy the drunken poetry, im also intoxicated: meth/pina colada's ;)

I'm more agony than reality, DQ, and less funny than peculiar. (more hairy than mulberry fairy) and certainly less scary than any of the above.

Yeah, sure you can call me supreme.. horus once called me supremely head in the clouds once that i recall.. heh.. course, my actual name is Lee. ;) My funny friend, i dont string shit together unless its going to make some amount of sense.. take out a dictionary and tell me what phrases i made that didnt make a damn wittle of sense oki? Dont worry about me needing to do this, I DID do just that before picking the words. And even before playing with the wordy cafe universe, i did two drafts and worked the damned thing out. course, im human, so take a crack at it and lets see if i did the dictionary magic correctly. also, i dont actually live in LA.. im in san jose, this is an almost pure creation of me imagination space adventure... i drive a nice pair of muscled legs and rough soled feet.. heh. And, yeah it can decrease ones effectiveness, but it all depends on HOW you do it.. and dude, talkin about comin around to burn my nonexistent car is a bit scary.. i mean, i am called "supremeDreamer" lol. and bout the enviroment, cmon man.. bush is in office, save it. ;P

What, no snicker about lamiacious?

So we have a triumvirate? How would you describe yourself?

Please, don't leave stupid shit on my poetry. This motherfucker and me have been arguing from before you even picked up a pencil, this argument is over a year long, and I will not have you blowing smoke up this piece of shit's ass on my piece of shit poem, God dammit, he's already smoking like motherday's present ceramic sixth grade ashtray thank's to his morning class boob count.

Maybe karma's a corn dog deep fat fried.

you know supreme (can I call you that?) of course I can , because as I've said... I'm drunk Horus said something to me recently .. um er.. to Retaliate recently that his Mentor (the capital was conspicuos) apparently told him: (and this has caused me to think about the subject dammit) "You've strung together some nice words" was the phrase. Is it possible that increasing one's vocabulary actually decreases one's effectiveness as a poet? Or maybe that's just the homebrew speakin' (As a fellow LA dweller I appreciate the humour, but I'm going to find you and burn your car to a briquette so that you can claim insurance and the environment can sleep better)

Except for the being stranded part. That was pretty tragic. Or was it?

thats what i call "hold on a second" repeated ever two or so minutes ;P