Shardik
on He's Dead You Bastards (for zzinia) by scitz
5 Aug 2003, 11:47 AM
"His girlfriend left him for some guy who could drive," Quite possibly the funniest line imaginable. But if you destroy the Angel, I'll have nothing to do?
No, but once I copyrighted a highly contagious disease by rhyming it with pepsi. (hep c)
A wordy explanation for the obvious.
Until that day she did unfurl
Why Nell had to stand up to pee.
Garrett S Sexton
on A parking lot, a smoke, and the pleasure of being alone by thepinkbunnyofdoom
5 Aug 2003, 10:55 AM
CHANNEL 5
RAGE, LOVE. FUCKING!!!! 10
Hey MnM, yo aint goin ta heaven that Whey...
Hey MnM, yo aint goin ta heaven that Whey...
Hint: I sing, I sang, I have sung.
Attention:
Britney (Pimple) by Ataryu
I have not felt her angelic touch
Which has to be so grace
Nor the warmth of her lips
Or her sweat embrace
Didn't you copyright this sweat thing?
Line 4- "meant" not ment
Line 7- is Answers supposed to be capitalized (doesn't add much, if it is purposeful)
Line 10- I think you mean "too"
god. i know the apostr. & punctuation thing. but i hate punctuations and caps. thanks
"my feet move with the littlest grace" I think littlest should be replaced with smallest or tiniest.
Also, I believe the second line should say "where scars meet bone and fade" so that your verb and subject can agree. (Plus it will make your rhyme better).
(Blush) Wanna be my valentime?
They sound terrifying. Do you have any theories for where these things originate? Birth trauma, sexual abuse, neurological sensitivity, etc.? How would you account for your increased susceptibility to these phenomenon? I think mine increase with stress. You are right about the being able to scare oneself more than any horror movie, that is why books that are scary are harder for me than movies.
oh, thanks. My best of recent.
I seem to be missing why your saying this to me. I said nothing to spark your anger or cause you to flame in my direction. He was talking about "pimple poems" which are often wrote by the poet just starting out. I didn't say they weren't good didn't say anything bad about anyone. I was simply agreeing with the author that everyone does start small. Posted an example... my first poem. Please explain how I'm talking out of my ass. Because as I see it you're the one doing that because what you've said makes no sense what so ever due to the comment you're repling to.
Since I deviled the art doing the devils work that I'm confused as all hell.
it is fairly obvious that it is written by men. all one need do is examine the first three words of the book of genesis: "in the beginning,".
they clearly impose limits on the limitlessness of the creator.
oh, god. i hate to encourage this sort of thing.
God I must be slipping that took 5 mins to do and I'm welling up.