http://mulberryfairy
replying on Ode to a Pizza Hut Roach by http://mulberryfairy
27 Jul 2003, 1:42 PM
Yeah, I know, that is why I am a social worker, not a poet.
Oh, okay, well by all means, carry on.
Yep, you're a band geek.
Quite the tease.
How rude.. deleting my comments.. should i post it? eh? ;)
No, actually, im a chemist.. you see, i got you to resynthesize "it" into a chemical dildo.. better crack than what you first had, now the addicts can enjoy an orgasm rush.
Yeah, I know, but the metaphor is marriage. The non-metaphorical "it" could be about any possession we carry around, like stupid VHS movies from the 80's or Nalgene water bottles.
Hehe do not take offense. I was just writing about an past experience about a man with no heart. I am sure there are a few men out there that are not like this. Very few to be exact. Well, have a good day.
You came back for more even though you hated part 1. Must be an addict.
Damn
What have men done to you?
Or what have they not done for you?
why am i a "sadist" and now a "psycho"? i mean yeah, my reply comes wayyy too late, but i was bored.. am i making you suffer btw? Because it makes me feel bad to be a sadist.. ;/
sure i meant guy in the sterile not sexist way.......
i mean now that you've told me that it is about marraige i can see that...but if one would read it w/o being told they will have a hard time in figuring it out and prolly will not be able to
cute.. but.. sorry, not being mean, but this isnt my cup of tea.. blessed with 6
sweet little poem
"in it's rose colored wear"
i don't think a rose has one certain color.
One can prolly saw RED but they can also be white, pink, orange, a mix of all the three, or even violet.
and you used rose in the line above so it sounds repettitive.
"gentle perfume there for my nose to consume"
is a nice rhyme but the word consume makes me think of eating up everything greedily. gentle/consume sounds kinda weird unless you meant it.
u should keep it in a vase with water
or it will wither and dry
Read the above comment, it is about marriage. Why haul it around and maintain it instead of rent sex like everyone else. Get it? And I am sure you mean "guy" in the genderless way, like "you guys".
YAHOOO!!! yes. bravo. good choice my friend, its a damned fine piece now. heres that nine i promised.
eh the thought of marraige rarely enters this 20 year olds mind
so maybe i did not see it.
i however own a kayak and would never rent one
rented dildos...hmm
u could start a biz that does that
you can set Rent-a-Dicks up at various
motels across the country.
i'd recommend the Hilton.
Maybe you can get the two Hilton sisters to be spokeswomen
or even teh Olsen sisters
horus8
replying on #1 entry from Chico, the star stalker on Pico by <{Baba^Yaga}>
27 Jul 2003, 1:01 PM
Ha! ahh ha ha! Good one.
thats why it has two fours. I just hope he renames it to dildo.. that would be fucking hilariouse.. id give it an eight or a nine then.