sure man, i love that whistle.. reminds me of that one tune in Once Upon A Time In America.. i loved that movie..

Don't mind if I do, can I whistle?

ah.. you manage to be funny at times, i must admit, i laughed up a storm reading this. :) nice job.

There is nothing ethical about dating a man. It is both gay and homosexual, and in the words of Mother Teresa, "absolutely appalling"... UNLESS, OF COURSE, YOU'RE THE AMAZING MULBERRY FAIRY! See how she charges blindly through the late night streets of poemeranker - now so pumped full of drugs and oppression that you can't even cross the road without being injected by a giant needle full of racist abuse. Her stained cape billowing uselessly behind her, she fearlessly upholds the integrity of her precious ethical mandate, regardless of what accidentally ends up landing on her face, and despite the fact that her mandate is probably a load of absolute guff. It's a jungle out there. A vast, steaming pile of mediocrity, self-delusion and lies... and that's just from horus8! Who knows what untold splats of misery lie at the heart of this giant dungheap of wanton literature? So go, mulberryfairy! Go! Confront the evils of this world! Listen to your heart and let gullibility be your guide, safe in the knowledge that your maturity and poverty stricken background will see you through... knowledge, I might add, that appears to be stored in the unbelievable smugness of your bloated face.

im a poet... i have a ridiculous obsession with the use of metaphors so dont worry, i didnt say that you were actually unexperienced in sex.. its sad that your mind is that rigid to not see that. And.. btw, who the fuck is being oppressed? the minorities? if words are that oppressive, then we are gods man.. i can attack without standing, i can simply sit and move me fingers.. I lived in East Side San Jose.. the mexican hellhole, and being white, i didnt make many friends.. so shove it pal, i dont need your shit, dont think that im some white surburbia kid who lived a nice life.. i didnt. I've been through shit that you couldn't comprehend.. Now, i don't hate mexicans, blacks, jews,.. i dont hate for pathetic reasons, i judge by character, thats it. I have a puerto rican friend.. i make 2000 racist jokes to his face, you know how oppressed he is? he laughs alot, hes been telling me to stop, since he can hardly breathe. THATS CHARACTER..

No, i dont lie. And, YES he IS me. because i made HIM.. relax jim, smoke another clit and have some more vodka...

Of course you did.

Why, you're still mad at me? Yeah, the helium balloons totally exploded all over the place, and the dead man's daughter, who was blowing up the balloons, got a tooth stuck in her shoe, which was actually probably a sign that there is a god because he only had about 3 or 4 cavity filled teeth left when he died.

Sure you can, and I bet you do often.

I would be happy to do that for you. Shape it like a fox head.

That was a joke horus8/babayaga, I actually enjoy the variety on poemranker, excepting the rhyming love poems. I didn't even know there was this poemranker controversy that you are talking about. But I appreciate the feedback about the Fox poem, I admitted being wordy, and that is why I posted it here for feedback before submitting it somewhere. You are right about the shape, my husband, a more visual kind of poet, thought it was supposed to be shaped like a fox head, LOL.

With all due respect, you don't know me well enough to assume me to be a sensitive virgin. I grew up living on welfare in subsidized housing like everyone else, and anyway, not many sensitive folks would willingly put their "poems" on here to get insulted, or, for that matter, be willing to say something about someone's comment knowing that other people would be offended. As a social worker, I have an ethical mandate, on and off duty (but I'm on call 24-7 anyway, so that distinction doesn't matter), to confront oppression, even if it means getting messy and being thought naive. (And like most social workers, I have a tendency to be too serious.)

Well thanks, does that mean we've made up?