Go to the bookstore. Buy a copy of "Poetry for dummies". Rub it against your genitalia. It's cheaper than a hooker, and feels better. Trust me. I drive a truck. LOL.!

like it or not, it likes to be not. because it's not like it's not or, it depends on what your definition of the word "is " is. wtf? lol!!!!!

nice poem... makes a person think... thats what writing is all about. Keep on writing because those of us the feeling and those of us that refuse to feel are the ones that have created language.

Holding a persons heart in your hand, caring only about them? Don't care about yourself because your obsession lies within and upon them? The feel of their skin makes your hands burn sensually? Short and sweet... nothing wrong with that. Thought I'd let you know what I got from your poem... see if I was right in how I read into it. If not I'd like to know what it was that you were thinking with your words.

I'm confused... but you made me laugh so all the better. Skipped from one thing to another.. but if you were trying to make the reader laugh and be confused you've managed... nice job.

"Escape is an Unafordable luxury" And apparently literacy.

"When your life seems to crunble down around you" It's like you reached in and took the words right out of my mouth? Amazing. Bravo.

And here we clearly see the benifits of raising your child in a good catholic school early on.

213.122.69.233

mmmm. Indeed.

Jack knifing through the sky. Cafes with pumpkin pie.

wtf... lol! blessed with 8.

im nothing to you... just a blurr in the back of your mind lost ...not to be found

Yes, as Bachus would say "Nice fucking socks" Now, off to throw tissue, good day.

A prostitute with a wooden clitoris, and ah... on ahhh, oh! on GHP, right? I'm getting closer though? Right? I think so, this is fun, it's better than that movie the Cell. And that's all that matters. It's like a scavenger hunt with that guy from slingblade "Not funny gay ha ha, funny queer, hmm ha.".