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walrus8 replying on The Bearded Men by walrus8 25 Jul 2003, 9:34 AM
I've warned you before! Remember the three questions? To reiterate, they are as follows. a) Is this an annoying, pointless attempt to ingratiate myself with the adult poetes? b) Will anyone actually read this, or will it just take up 10 miles of space on comment-recent.jsp because they can see from the first five tedium-ridden words exactly what the rest is going to say? c) Could I post this on my shitty livejournal instead of defecating it all over Poemeranker?
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on The Bearded Men by walrus8 25 Jul 2003, 9:31 AM
But then it'd make tOO much sense.
walrus8 replying on Read this by Southern_Bell 25 Jul 2003, 9:28 AM
bite, blight, bright, cite, fight, flight, fright, height, kite, knight, light, might, plight, quite, right, sight, site, sleight, slight, spite, sprite, tight, trite, white, write, alight, bomb site, box kite, brake light, contrite, delight, despite, dog bite, egg white, excite, first light, flea bite, forthright, gang fight, green light, head blight, hold tight, ignite, incite, indict, indite, invite, in flight, in sight, knife fight, land site, large white, late blight, leaf blight, onsite, outright, own right, polite, put right, rear light, recite, red light, rewrite, sit tight, stage fright, take flight, tonight, upright, uptight, white knight ... etc
walrus8 on There's no point by LosT SykoPath 25 Jul 2003, 9:23 AM
Brilliant! I love this poeme! I have learnt it off my heart and now I must log off as I'm going to read it aloud in a pet's mortuary to a bagpipe accompaniment. Cheers!
walrus8 on untitled by highnightmaregurl 25 Jul 2003, 9:18 AM
Have you read "Anorexia for Beginners: A Guide for Fat Kids" by Dr Helmut Wank?
walrus8 on so much by highnightmaregurl 25 Jul 2003, 9:17 AM
You are indeed unique and rare, my sweet.
walrus8 on falling by highnightmaregurl 25 Jul 2003, 9:16 AM
Very good indeed! Please post some more poems on poemeranker.com! I will be delighted to read them! Keep up the good work! Cheers! Bye!
I wish it to be known that I will happily give poetry classes to any girl under fifteen. First we shall discuss the poetic merit of my poems, concentrating on the masterful "AIDS in a van". Then we shall take off our clothes (so as to be nude) and proceed to the Towne Hall, where we shall recite The Collected Works of Jeremi B. Handrinos from start to finish.
http://mulberryfairy on The Bearded Men by walrus8 25 Jul 2003, 9:13 AM
With your valuable feedback about the switch from "mouth" to "anus", I think you should replace men with "women"... "It's the bearded women! I'm really scared! They're coming again, And we're not prepared!" And how could we be?
Thanks for the feedback, it will surely have a place in my revision.
walrus8 on CrapBeer by DurtKL 25 Jul 2003, 9:06 AM
Real men drink tea.
http://mulberryfairy replying on Killing Ben Afleck by Shardik 25 Jul 2003, 9:05 AM
No, I meant what I said. Ben Afleck, even if you hate him, is not worth the passion you are wasting on him here.
walrus8 on Departing Suburbia by Caducus 25 Jul 2003, 9:05 AM
Please do not spit in my tea, kind sir.
walrus8 on Jaded by Caducus 25 Jul 2003, 9:04 AM
I think you should change the title: "How to Change an Old Man's Nappy, Part 1".
I think you should replace the word "mouth" at the end of the third line with the word "anus": Each time she placed rubber gloved hands inside my anus I gagged, my teeth’s chattering barely controlled by the light pressure of her hand.
walrus8 on Ode to a Fox Cub by http://mulberryfairy 25 Jul 2003, 8:59 AM
Any poem with "bowels" as the third word gets a thumbs up from me!! Cheers!
<~> on Departing Suburbia by Caducus 25 Jul 2003, 8:19 AM
cad-- a few nitpicks: starved cravings--redundant ‘lets do lunch' bunch flow chart obssesives--corrected punctuation nice lines here: Sell a common man a common dream, Weave the fabric of society in to his seam,
<~> on Jaded by Caducus 25 Jul 2003, 8:09 AM
better, but i have to say that the thing that struck me most the first time through was her pulling on your hair. that would make for a more memorable chorus than jealousy. just my opiniom, though... :)
Caducus on Read this by Southern_Bell 25 Jul 2003, 8:05 AM
get rid of new plight, plight will suffice. Cut the digression of the obvious lines and your getting there
Caducus on CrapBeer by DurtKL 25 Jul 2003, 8:02 AM
One other thing : Kaliber ! now we're talking shite