Craychus
on Not right now by thepinkbunnyofdoom
24 Jul 2003, 4:39 AM
for some reason, that amused me :) i like it!
lot going on here
sounds like one on eminem's lost rap song....
wow that's a creative way to arrange letters, what about a poem
here is mine
Taste the Rainbow by JOYluck
You always used to swallow them whole didn't you?
Purple, Yellow, Orange, and blue.
After a minute of fucking I'd roll off you,
Trying not to notice that bored look on your face,
And you'd roll your eyes reaching over onto the nightstand
To dig into a red jumbo sized bag of skittles.
It was the weed. The weed I tell you!
Underperforming drug worked wonders on my penis.
At least, in my mind it did.
I'm not sixteen anymore. My hand gets less and less practice
Each new year. I swear this swelling fat around my stomach
and thighs makes it harder to look in the mirror.
I just can't find it anymore!
So, now you're lying there, torn up and bloody.
This knife really did its work.
Oragans, tissue, and cells. They are all the same.
Just on different levels. You get me?
You always used to swallow them whole didn't you?
I know for sure now.
ahh this poem has finally made it to the heap of trash known as the BEST
lets see how quickly the blue zeros shall knock you off again
sad
I can only imagin that this says something great, and I commend your effort, however I don't speak gibberish, therefore I cannot go either way with this
Emphasis on the uncompromising rebellious nature you sadist, not the street, geez.
Six below that is one in a cell phone ring variety? Odd, to say the least, in fact gruesomely disturbing like frozen vomit on the side of a car.
Because...
Chewbacca needs Han Solo
to translate.
I fucking love those lines. This is wicked, a great piece of satire and a real turkish thumb to your enemies.
Look what i did to your best poems - 10
you need more sex.. have a dildo, let the waters go from that tight dam, let the river flow, please go, hoe. ;)
Do you know what that bastard did? He stopped off to pick up his laundry, knock back a couple of beers, and grab a bit to eat before he accidently ran into them(I'm serious he totaled my pino). Which of course might not have been so bad if he hadn't forgotten his licence in Living room.
Nice, nice.. ;) 10.
Ah, horus, dont worry, alot of my own work is being shat apon with blue zeros aswell.. not many can appreciate the way you challenge people to write better than they currently do, or the way you poke at PC like a madman with a knife. But, you know what? fuck them. ;) 10.
I guess I'll just have have a cup of blue frogurt.
door #2, sirrah.
this is carol merrill in a micromini, with a trayload of canapes and champagne. who can get closest without going over?
street poet.. hrmm.. im not sure if this is a label i really want to keep ;/
had you gone to the library, you might have answered your own question. instead you'll be freezing your balls off in siberia, with no red-morning tea.
if woody had gone straight to the police, this would never have happened.