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Craychus on Not right now by thepinkbunnyofdoom 24 Jul 2003, 4:39 AM
for some reason, that amused me :) i like it!
DJCARTER on Karma by blankel 24 Jul 2003, 3:02 AM
congrats on starting high school next year!!!!
DJCARTER on Mississipi Murder by scitz 24 Jul 2003, 3:01 AM
lot going on here
DJCARTER on Over beast by Crakyamuni 24 Jul 2003, 3:00 AM
sounds like one on eminem's lost rap song....
DJCARTER on ~~~ My Lament For Museheart ~~~ by JoyLuck 24 Jul 2003, 2:59 AM
wow that's a creative way to arrange letters, what about a poem
JoyLuck replying on Her Sleeping Form by JoyLuck 24 Jul 2003, 1:53 AM
here is mine Taste the Rainbow by JOYluck You always used to swallow them whole didn't you? Purple, Yellow, Orange, and blue. After a minute of fucking I'd roll off you, Trying not to notice that bored look on your face, And you'd roll your eyes reaching over onto the nightstand To dig into a red jumbo sized bag of skittles. It was the weed. The weed I tell you! Underperforming drug worked wonders on my penis. At least, in my mind it did. I'm not sixteen anymore. My hand gets less and less practice Each new year. I swear this swelling fat around my stomach and thighs makes it harder to look in the mirror. I just can't find it anymore! So, now you're lying there, torn up and bloody. This knife really did its work. Oragans, tissue, and cells. They are all the same. Just on different levels. You get me? You always used to swallow them whole didn't you? I know for sure now.
ahh this poem has finally made it to the heap of trash known as the BEST lets see how quickly the blue zeros shall knock you off again sad
DJCARTER on Para Sa Aking Sinta by NewbieMe 24 Jul 2003, 1:39 AM
I can only imagin that this says something great, and I commend your effort, however I don't speak gibberish, therefore I cannot go either way with this
Shardik replying on The Call Of Cannons by SupremeDreamer 24 Jul 2003, 1:06 AM
Emphasis on the uncompromising rebellious nature you sadist, not the street, geez.
Shardik replying on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 24 Jul 2003, 1:02 AM
Six below that is one in a cell phone ring variety? Odd, to say the least, in fact gruesomely disturbing like frozen vomit on the side of a car.
Because... Chewbacca needs Han Solo to translate. I fucking love those lines. This is wicked, a great piece of satire and a real turkish thumb to your enemies. Look what i did to your best poems - 10
SupremeDreamer replying on Nude pictures of children at work by Shardik 23 Jul 2003, 11:21 PM
you need more sex.. have a dildo, let the waters go from that tight dam, let the river flow, please go, hoe. ;)
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 23 Jul 2003, 11:17 PM
Do you know what that bastard did? He stopped off to pick up his laundry, knock back a couple of beers, and grab a bit to eat before he accidently ran into them(I'm serious he totaled my pino). Which of course might not have been so bad if he hadn't forgotten his licence in Living room.
Nice, nice.. ;) 10.
Ah, horus, dont worry, alot of my own work is being shat apon with blue zeros aswell.. not many can appreciate the way you challenge people to write better than they currently do, or the way you poke at PC like a madman with a knife. But, you know what? fuck them. ;) 10.
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 23 Jul 2003, 11:12 PM
I guess I'll just have have a cup of blue frogurt.
<~> replying on Nude pictures of children at work by Shardik 23 Jul 2003, 11:06 PM
door #2, sirrah. this is carol merrill in a micromini, with a trayload of canapes and champagne. who can get closest without going over?
SupremeDreamer replying on The Call Of Cannons by SupremeDreamer 23 Jul 2003, 11:02 PM
street poet.. hrmm.. im not sure if this is a label i really want to keep ;/
<~> replying on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 23 Jul 2003, 10:59 PM
had you gone to the library, you might have answered your own question. instead you'll be freezing your balls off in siberia, with no red-morning tea.
<~> replying on Feasting Ouroboros by <~> 23 Jul 2003, 10:58 PM
if woody had gone straight to the police, this would never have happened.