Bill Z Bub
replying on rainday by Bill Z Bub
16 Jul 2003, 11:10 AM
Thankye olde crone!
Yes, it's the key to the gates of paradise.
but, so worth the effort.
Dammit you are hard to please woman! :\
Stranger than "cloudbells" or "galoshed"? :)
Yep, I'd like to hear the music to this.
let me know when you post the mp3, okay>?
What's so sad? That's how most of america is.
"There where no pretenses made here" were, Bugger'd. I wont even bother fixing your attempt at spelling 'rhyme'. I can only wonder if god had the same idea when he put you here.
horus8
replying on -=Dark_Angel=_ fucks his mum With Stephan Robbins' face by <{Baba^Yaga}>
16 Jul 2003, 1:47 AM
Ah, probably, under -=Dark_Angel=-'s list of poetry, young one. Where else.
thanks for pointing those out, ill get em fixed. user friendly isnt something i can be called, im the thorn of the black rose my fellow poet.. the thorn to prick the mind.. ;)
profane...
did you want 'chords', to give it more blood?
maybe "laid" instead of "lain"
good work, here, but not user-friendly. then again, does it need to be?
tintagiles. he's lyrical, like that.
i dunno, it just made me think of him.
i tried the "eat me" first, and this was what came out.
i've since moved on to the "drink me" portion of our evening, and so i will post this:
http://www.ginbender.com/Vol1No3pg01.htm
i want more bounce in this nonsensey-like rhymer!
(oh, i am such a whiner!)
good star, but take it all the way, BZB.
i know exactly what you need. take it waaay back, and treat yourself to a little "pretty hate machine" , extra loud! you'll thank me in the morning!!1
SupremeDreamer
replying on -=Dark_Angel=_ fucks his mum With Stephan Robbins' face by <{Baba^Yaga}>
15 Jul 2003, 8:38 PM
Your assumption would be correct ole horus. Where can i read them then?