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richa on TPBOD Joins a pack of wolves by Luzr 10 Jul 2003, 9:55 AM
oh I thought this was quite good
King Abdullah II replying on TPBOD Joins a pack of wolves by Luzr 10 Jul 2003, 9:54 AM
PS Have you guessed who I am yet, Jason?
King Abdullah I on TPBOD Joins a pack of wolves by Luzr 10 Jul 2003, 9:52 AM
Ha ha! So you're the Poet Formerly Known as Simple Dimple! You fucking faggot! I never guessed that thepinkfuckingbunnyofdoom possessed an inane devotion to meaningless quotation of truisms.
Luzr on we're insane by nolan 10 Jul 2003, 9:51 AM
I've got that feeling when I smoked opium and then another 2 bowls of bud, when I was getting pretty drunk at a wedding. You should have huddled in a ball hiding in the corner. Just incase the acid flashback kicks in and then things get really fucked up. -10-
Luzr on Dictionary Magic Test Results (DMTR) by DreamerSupreme 10 Jul 2003, 9:35 AM
Oh and while your at it, if its not too much trouble, instead of just my thepinkbunnyofdoom, could you add in fluffy and rabbit? You know, the way it is on my email address if you forget the @yahoo.com thingy.
<~> replying on The Ebony Orchid of Theta by Shardik 10 Jul 2003, 8:50 AM
theta brain waves--dream state. nice poem, h. it calls out for a continuation.
Robert K Foster replying on Anouk by daniella 10 Jul 2003, 6:19 AM
That's fine. no need to be closed minded about some advice. I am offering you a response, pointing out that perhaps readers will misinterpret your intentions because of a lack of clarity. "bubbling up" is not a clear and concise description. So, asking me to believe what I want to believe is fine, but I beleive that this could be a better peom. Strive to go beyond the mediocre. give up some words.
richa on The Eye by Enki 10 Jul 2003, 4:27 AM
I wouldn't bother with the rhyme. This poem pretends to be profound then rhymes dashing and gnashing. It just seems a bit daft
richa on Love by Enki 10 Jul 2003, 4:25 AM
I like haiku with a change of direction, all in 17 syllables. the rubber glove thing is a perversion right?
richa on Cannibalism by Enki 10 Jul 2003, 4:23 AM
yes I like hot spices with flesh and this haiku
richa on Omerta el prostitute by <{Baba^Yaga}> 10 Jul 2003, 4:21 AM
enjoyable to read, ambiguous yes but with certain bits to hang on to like 'boys ride by laughing on bikes'
richa on What I Remember by leviathan 10 Jul 2003, 4:09 AM
varied selection of words and I like your verse structure. However some of the imagery doesn't really lure me into the poem and I think more basic elements of language would help
richa on What I Remember by leviathan 10 Jul 2003, 4:09 AM
varied selection of words and I like your verse structure. However some of the imagery doesn't really lure me into the poem and I think more basic elements of language would help
richa on What I Remember by leviathan 10 Jul 2003, 4:09 AM
varied selection of words and I like your verse structure. However some of the imagery doesn't really lure me into the poem and I think more basic elements of language would help
richa on The Beach by leviathan 10 Jul 2003, 4:06 AM
a lot of nice idioms in here. And it reads well as a poem. the beach that used to be a throne is a bit naff though and takes away from the maturity of the overall
richa on "last needle" by nolan 10 Jul 2003, 4:03 AM
try not to rhyme so loudly when addressing serious issues. by the way I don't believe you to be addicted to anything. This is not focused enough
richa on in here (i lost a piece of my mind) by nolan 10 Jul 2003, 4:01 AM
the first verse I will break free to I will be free. Has potential to work but I think you need to use the same repetition in the other verses
richa on smile by nolan 10 Jul 2003, 3:59 AM
not a lot of insight here and the description relies on cliche. However I do feel a certain empathy with these feelings but that is more what I bring to the poem than you I think
SupremeDreamer on The Ebony Orchid of Theta by Shardik 10 Jul 2003, 2:26 AM
I was wondering about the title, particularly the theta bit.. what does theta represent or mean?
SupremeDreamer on The Ebony Orchid of Theta by Shardik 10 Jul 2003, 1:44 AM
Beautiful poem man, i think of all the poems ive read of yours i like this one the most. 10