Yeah went with a deeper meaning here that I actually remember. It is that people are more than they appear to be, Appearances are decieving, and sometimes people with just one thing in common with one another can help each other survive.

Its very off tempo but what can I say I was inspired by reading the canterbary tales again. I love Chaucer. So I thought I'd borrow some of his style. Its a great Idea but Other than the first and third verse I can't really picture it right in my head. Its not how I want it but its close. Grrr....

And it doesn't say anything? What are you blind? Because, I believe it says a lot. 1) For one, it's a new form of dada poetry entirely that this beautiful young man created in his mind as easily as it takes you to eat a gallon of ice cream. 2)It clearly says he's lonely, horny, stoned, bored, observant and artistic, not to mention getting a free show. 3)Uses words to not only create an entirely new way of using poetry as art, but does it with more humor then you could muster up from another lonely night of eating fritos and watching three's company, again. 4)Proves to the world that you have yet to have a real orgasm, so quick faking it bitch and go finger bang yourself 'till you piss and collapse please, now! Get!

This isn't about being a pediofile, Its about realising that bridge between teenage boyhood, and manhood, and wanting to be able to do the things you could do if you were on the otherside of the age line.

Don't lash out at joyluck just because you're a guilt stricken jealous Asian whore.

Yeah Thats what I get for letting the guys talk me into writing songs when I'm drunk.

first of all how does this garbage offend you?

I wrote it in word, which gave me a wider layout. It should look something like this Sing Sing of Sing of Nothing Dance Dance To Dance to the Sound *example ends* True I'll rename it. The humor was in the simple spurt of common sense at the end. Its done in a format I call Steps but I'm sure it has a better name. I tired to leave out most emotion yet still be appealing, but with the difference in word processors, Its lost its steps and without them is much more confusing.

im bored, mentally and physically exhausted. plus i was hoping to awaken the dead and see some movement in the comment boards. success.

Where I commenting to you I would have replyed to your previous comment(Just like you did to mine), instead of writing in the above comment box, a whole new comment that its rather unlikely U'd see.

?? Me?

Tales such as love, heartache, corruption, and most every other idea ever thought up are as old as man. It is only thru variation of the tale that they have survived and managed to progress on further despite being as old as we are.

Ah, well.. all these concepts so miraculously weaved into this poem just... doesnt strike me as imaginative or new.. old ideas written into a strange remix. Poetic story form? ah.. heh. one should perhaps question the purpose or usefullness of using such form for this poem? eh?

yeah ok I know i have to be more creative thanx for the info, good looking out

Thanks for the well said explaination about emotional depth, I feel enlightened by it. About religion and religious teaching, have no worries, for I would only resort to using for example christian bible passages and would deftly twist and present a alternate interpretation. Also, philosophy and metaphysics is _not_ religion. It is indeed true that metaphysics is perhaps the central pillar to eastern thought. Hindu and Buddhist texts include some of the most pure and well concieved concepts of metaphysics. But there is a difference between respecting and using these religions to study the concepts and practicing the religion. My basic philosophical theory spawns from pantheistic shamanism, along with metaprogramming (the mental programing of the mind and how to re-program it) and theoretical use of psychoactive substances to help go beyond normal reality programing and thought. Theres alot more that can be listed, but I'm not going to get deep into this, less I be a rambling insect. As to the injected sense of me pondering the questions, its more like I wished to present an image of calm reflection. But I will try to make another that doesn't present that type of presentation for perhaps a more direct approach. About it not needing to be emotionless, your right, it doesn't require it. But if you look into eastern metaphysical writings, you will come across alot that considers the power that emotion has over people, and how it will vary from person to person, which in result starts to change the true meaning of the mystical text. I don't deny the possibility of presenting the mystical via emotion would be perhaps a more powerfull media that would better attract readers and thinkers. I simply have a slight preference in my opinion concerning how I see it. Perhaps I'll attempt writing a mystic poem with a deeper emotional tone as an interesting challenge. Again, thanks for your input, it did indeed make me think.

The song is based loosely off of my Vilanelle called 'For Kristen'. It works better as a lyric but It took me too long to get it into Vilanelle format and I don't want to write another one cause those are defiantly a difficult style to write in.