<{Baba^Yaga}>
on One Night Stand by Audaciouslilgrl
12 Jun 2003, 4:52 PM
Merely thrust (other) by whitebrother
Yo, it's merely the thrust from your bust
like lifting hefty bags of boobs up and over
the fence for another ride on the hippo
hungry, hungry, hungry, but
then I notice that you have
a penis too and the paper airplane
that was my erection slides
under the door and into the
closet of homosexual denial.
I cry tears of gayity knowing
I'll never have to hurl you
and your boobs over another
fence again.
I really love your pointless use of colons, and your consistant confusing of 'than' for "then". Hey, when you get sick of being an idiot perhaps you could go back to just being you? Alas, you'd still be an idiot, but what the fuck, some sperm never swim straight out the gate, and some sperm just float on the backs of others, or in a proper face holster they are carried home to glory. GLORY! What were we talking about again? Ah, yeah, you blowing me for charity, whatta ya say, do your poor newbie friends a favor sacrafice yourself to -=Dark_Angel=- to appease the beast within, and save the future of bad poets on poemranker.
How about getting quartered by Clydesdales? Is that simple? If so... Play Polish roulette with a squirt gun full of beaver piss.
What would you do to it if I put it in your hand?
At your age who cares, if you are only fifteen you have nothing to lose. Because James, I gurantee, you are not the next Rimbaud, so submit your poems. I'm 28, I will read your 15 year old poetry taking into account that you are fifteen, you have my word, but rest assured if it's shit I will laugh James, I will cackle madly because that's why I personally come to poemranker James, to cackle nude and to read your shit to feel cleaner in reading my shit.
yeah, if it was labeled an ode and not a sonnet.
Nice.
Yes, James, I agree that must be why my fish tank whistles three times a day for tea and my house is made of scoria. I'm in HELL! Good god and I thought those were just ugly talking birds shitting on my patio umbrella?
Wow, that had some potential, had some good points, but you tried to hard to rhyme it and so it all fell apart. Good effort though.
I will not submit any of my work to the likes of you. You people are an insult to every true poet that comes here. I do not claim to be great nor even good...but those who can't show respect; as far as I'm concerned can burn in hell.
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Also, significant lack of character is an understatement James. It shows plenty of character out of lack of any character, just not in that midwestern "hey ya'll let's be cock suckers and blow smoke up eachother's ass psuedo poets, and weekend poets (because that's what you and your friends are James)" way you and your friends are used to. But once again let's take a look at where we are at James. poemranker.com. I don't specificly see a bumpersticker on this 'vehicle of poetical rankings' that states "but be especially nice if they are especially stupid" do you asshole?
Go fuck your mom's face with potato peeler James. Submit or shut up outsider. Or put your money where your mouth is. Maybe your friends should go write at stillsuckingmomstit.com or you should start your own website called hi i'm Jame's John K.s older brother, and I do not have a blowjob super glued to my chin that's my Hummel collection.
I really like this poem, it makes tons of sense to me... And, let's look beyond the spelling of silicone...
Go fuck your mom's face with potato peeler James. Submit or shut up outsider.
Hey Horus8
I will never leave you alone with your prostitutes but point taken I know I have a lot to learn I'm 19 and I have come here to learn from the masters. Mona Lisa (who referred me) is scared of this site bless her ! I welsome any comment, insult, praise whatever bring it on...so long as i learn my souls up for sale.
thanks for your comment.
hazards coming back to hazard you.
You and your peers should have more respect for other peoples work. Making immature comments is not only stupid but shows a significant lack of character.
Besides, it reminds me of Chris de burgh's(?)"This bleeding heart"!!