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some deleted user on drops of blood in the wind by crwncka1 12 Jun 2003, 12:58 PM
i think you should find some famous singer to sing it!
really? no, rely. Anywho, I'll bare my balls that you may kick them, firmedly. go for the hook. open with the fencing scene, then backtrack to the birthday party. I am jealous. I am blonde. i am erect? was not was. 10 because you put FORT into this. yes. encore.
god'swife on Jellybean Land by JoyLuck 12 Jun 2003, 12:25 PM
My son loves these. He actually ate vomit. I like grass, and dirt tastes so much like dirt, it's satisfying just to know there are flavor engineers taking so much pride in their work.
INTRANSIT on Coloured waifs home by horus8 12 Jun 2003, 11:59 AM
right on the head.
crwncka1 replying on one grey dream by crwncka1 12 Jun 2003, 11:27 AM
yew got that rite :D
crwncka1 replying on one starry night by crwncka1 12 Jun 2003, 11:20 AM
horus8, your much better then my speelchecker software... fyi, i couldnt pass 5th grade spelling class, and never could pass a english class 6th grade beyond... but i promise to hone my grammer skillz just for you
crwncka1 replying on motel 666 by crwncka1 12 Jun 2003, 11:15 AM
thx horus8, i burnt the weed before i leart to read.... BUT THIS HERE ISNT ANYTHING BUT A FREAKING POEM RANKER SITE... NOT A PUBLISHER
god'swife replying on one starry night by crwncka1 12 Jun 2003, 11:04 AM
Can a single locust be heard, and if you heard one wouldn't you run screaming into town elling the locusts are coming? Don't they travel in swarms? What, do they go on vacation? Sweet poem, but locusts?
horus8 on one starry night by crwncka1 12 Jun 2003, 10:47 AM
You are a bundle of dynamite by golly, it's locust, by the way.
richa on Iceman by Kitch 12 Jun 2003, 10:45 AM
not a bad try at all I would say however your use of words such as soul and truth is perhaps unqualified with argument and image
richa on Coloured waifs home by horus8 12 Jun 2003, 10:41 AM
yes a good haiku wistful is a word everyone seems to use. I think it apt
Win replying on Her Smile's Salvation by Win 12 Jun 2003, 9:53 AM
Yeah, it's kind of a rip-off of Shakespeare's well-known 29th sonnet. Just felt like trying a different style.
horus8 on Her Smile's Salvation by Win 12 Jun 2003, 9:39 AM
God, I lost the feeling in my legs reading that... wait a minute? I don't even have legs. ARGHHHHHHH.
horus8 on Fate Sucks by Kitch 12 Jun 2003, 9:35 AM
Heeker, is a hermetic geek that leaks. No, it means, not to shabby. But if you ever fucking 6 my prostitute series again I'll fucking bring the heek and cook it over your abdomen in jerk sauce with rice pilaf and eat pudding out of your arm pits Kitch, I'm serious, you are not a good enough writer yet to six my prostitute series. I will let you know when you are, trust me. Now this poem above me is a perfect example of a six, there is a difference between a 7 and a six, Kitch this is a six.
horus8 on Jellybean Land by JoyLuck 12 Jun 2003, 9:27 AM
flu would work better than poo because it has poo in it with barf piss and fever stink. aye?
LosT SykoPath on The Girl for Me by DeadtotheWorld 12 Jun 2003, 9:26 AM
you already know how i feel about it
ummm. yeah? I suppose your point is, if I was a serious writer, I would have written it in Final Draft 5.
Is this what you do while I sleep Jeremi? Please vote NO PEOPLE TO THE sag merger my buddy Esai Morales said so.