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replying on A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig
6 Jun 2003, 2:37 AM
Yes, you are.
It's amazing how you've fooled everyone into believing that you aren't Mr. Pig. I am lost for words.
Have you ever even been to Macedonia? No. I suggest you write on Dumbo goes to Whittier and back to Tomkat. Here's a 4 for writing about something you know nothing about.
Honestly, why would you give this a zero? lol. I at least give your poems what they deserve, 3's, 4's, 2's or I don't vote out of respect for the mentally challenged, don't you ever just get sick of something and ignore it?
I suggest you change it to smurfs and poodles. Your street poetry is very coming of age! Bravo.
Macabre 8
You were the worst thing that's ever happened to me. The only good thing that came out of me being associated with you is finding someone I love. The guy who picked me up from my abortion and who held my hand and slept with me to make sure I was alright. Thank you Jeremi. You are the greatest. I will never forget you.
Congrats J.B. You're well read. Yes it's borrowed from H.P., Brian Lumley, the Necronomicon, and such.
This feeling, so so deep, I am grammatically unable to explain it or spell it.
Clive barker's surrogate dildo.
The mad arab ALHAZAR, this must mean the book of the dead. The ancient ones are about. flee, flee to the safety of a moist towellette.
Aint I the lucky apple of your eye?
Twas i that tenned your pen.
Jeremi B. Handrinos
replying on Barometric pressure & true love (The prince of storms) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
6 Jun 2003, 12:39 AM
Yeah, you're write, 'me', but I ended up liking it better this way for some reason.
Papa Smurf you are the greatest! However, I am not scared of the dick anymore and your point is what? Oh right. You forgot to mention the avocado omlette. Yes. And let's not forget dumping a pregnant chick in a clinic and not picking her up..... Ohhhhhh. One day, I hope you're man enough to appologize to me. But then again, you are only a poodle.
Hahaha. The sad part is that this isn't even me.
Sounds like you're going Tupac.
Bill Z Bub
on Barometric pressure & true love (The prince of storms) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
5 Jun 2003, 6:26 PM
The second-last line: "Since your love will never keep warm."
Should there be a word in between keep and warm? Such as "me" or "you"?
Yeaaah, now if I can just convince Horus8 to record it...
As for the splaining, I'll remove it eventually.
Thanks for the comment Brandon, and I have your e-maiol typed up, I just gotta get the chance to send it, work is really hecktic yah know? BUt thanks for the friendship poem, I loved it!! and on the other note, you guys know my complanning about him, and everything, is just making him do it more? that's what he wants, just ignore him and he'll go away. =P *muahs*