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Bill Z Bub replying on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub 5 Jun 2003, 5:52 PM
But thats because you are an god of drunkeness and poetry.
INTRANSIT on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub 5 Jun 2003, 5:41 PM
Ok. so, if my catamaran, which sadly, sank,(there's a hunnert mousuits looking for it now) is an ode, then this scU-REAMS LYRICS!!! Hello-o? anybody listening? no? fine. whatever. great piece. drop the 'splaining. go.
Bachus replying on A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig 5 Jun 2003, 5:21 PM
's with "s, sorry to be cryptic with that typo, here it is'only' work if the words didn't happen in real life.lol.
Bachus replying on A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig 5 Jun 2003, 5:19 PM
Reading you is always my pleasure. What I meant was replacing the ''s with "'s and just a few other minor tweaks here and there, but as always you are spot on with imaginative depiction, and creating a vivid lirerary landscape for the reader to go to. A good title might be "How we meant to leave it".
Bachus replying on Jeremi B. Handrinos: Part 2 by wCUNTw 5 Jun 2003, 5:15 PM
Thank you. You've been over before I take it.
Bachus on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub 5 Jun 2003, 5:13 PM
It was better left unexplained. Fuck them, make them draw their own conclusions. Make them imagine. I, on the other hand, gathered something very similiar too your explanation the first time in the cage.
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on Crush Rejected by thepinkbunnyofdoom 5 Jun 2003, 4:45 PM
Actually it is a reference to stigmata, a movie I had watched with the individual this is about.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Crush Rejected by thepinkbunnyofdoom 5 Jun 2003, 3:54 PM
The phrase "my eyes bleed tears" is plagiarised from the following poeme by Roger Pfingston: http://www.2river.org/2RView/5_2/poems/pfingston1.html
thepinkbunnyofdoom on wish by daniella 5 Jun 2003, 2:49 PM
Indeed.
thepinkbunnyofdoom on Jeremi B. Handrinos: Part 2 by wCUNTw 5 Jun 2003, 2:46 PM
Your right he's not.
Mr Pig replying on A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig 5 Jun 2003, 11:58 AM
Dear Horus, I did notice line 3 was a tad poor so I have changed it. I hope to tighten it in due course. Thanks all for reading it.
wEdible Underpantsw on Taliban Ambush by scitz 5 Jun 2003, 11:51 AM
CHA CHA CHA CHA CHA CHA CHA CHA CHA
wEdible Underpantsw on sharkmouth by Bill Z Bub 5 Jun 2003, 11:50 AM
GIVE US MORE PORN
wEdible Underpantsw on Her Galactic Boudoir, his make-work by Bachus 5 Jun 2003, 11:49 AM
CUNT 10
wFraser Allonby Q.C.w on Jeremi B. Handrinos: Part 2 by wCUNTw 5 Jun 2003, 11:43 AM
who is jeremy b handrinos? what is this poem about? why don't i understand any of the other comments? what is going on around here? no points from me, I'm afraid ...
Bill Z Bub on A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig 5 Jun 2003, 11:11 AM
I don't know why, but I don't care for this one much. Just the way things are sometimes.
Bill Z Bub on Carpet threading the sky by INTRANSIT 5 Jun 2003, 11:08 AM
First half excellent. Second half confusing. Then again, I'm the idiot that wrote "soothing blisters of synthesis walk on alkaline locks", so I have no right to say such things! I must be punished. The title is a ten. I give the body seven. That averages out to 8.5! Rock on.
richa on wish by daniella 5 Jun 2003, 10:50 AM
interesting set out, It can be read as a single line, Very sweet sentiment
Bill Z Bub on suppose (a warm sun) by richa 5 Jun 2003, 10:49 AM
Wonderful, spare, lilting, tilting, abrubt and nine,
richa on Taliban Ambush by scitz 5 Jun 2003, 10:47 AM
yes very evocative