Of course.

therefore you own up to nothing? yeah, i bet you don't. how chillingly creepy.

Overall, not a bad collection, but it's not setting new standards, that's for sure. I would of given you sixes and sevens. Maybe an eight after some editing.

"prays for hope as her world uncurls" unfurls, would work better. nameless. "Maybe though dieng you'll see we're not unalike!"" through dying. Also, the piece needs to put come commas to work for it.

"one second you cold ,the next hot" you're. It's. "behind still holding to you" onto.

excuses, notice the c.

Okay, you can stop now.

I'd rather you climb down from your tree and watch a disney film for a change.:)

So long ago I read this. too immature to fully appreciate its product. It's fermenting well in my cask.

Guess i'd better getthehellouttayourway. Gimme my tiki back!

I'll tell you what really fucking annoys me about pieces of crap like this. The whole reason poemes with simple rhyming schemes that crudely express an obvious and uninteresting emotion are seen as deep and meaningful and beautiful is because people associate them with children, because it's the kind of poeme children write, and when children do something sad inexpertly it's beautiful and meaningful etc.. But you aren't a child, so when you do it it isn't beautiful or meaningful, it's just stupid. Stop doing it.

A A B B C C D D BLAH BLAH SHUT UP