-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on Dream by Cali
1 Jun 2003, 7:40 AM
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Dead people don't become angels. Even the most basic grasp of theology would tell you that. This is also at least the second poeme in which you have rhymed "love" with "above" in some insipid reference to heaven.
The worst thing I have ever read. 0.
this is more like the horus I enjoy reading...sorry about the 5 I gave on your other poem...maybe i shouldnt have been so smug and just said i didnt really care for it.sometimes, your poems get a little too involved and loose m half way through. most of the time though,I enjoy your writing....again..sorry
ps...lol...i see you have found all my poems and given me 5's....touche!
-=AIDS=-
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I went to dance but my legs fell off.
Impossible to dance to I give it a 4.
Anyone that would dance to this is five
a little hard to dance to...i give it a 5
I like this version a lot better...you got it going on girl
lovely, almost mystical and very nice rhythm
Thief, otherwise tragically hip and audacious.
some deleted user
replying on There is no Happy Hour in Bakersfield, Ca. by horus8
31 May 2003, 9:03 PM
I do read poetry, and to tell you the truth, Poe is my favorite. Robert frost also.Emily dickenson Sorry that I tainted poetry so much with truth. And no, she's not going to demand me to do something just because you said. Sorry, you aren't overall authority. So, I'm a lil selfish, but you demanding someone else to write or read like you do, that's just worse.
I demand that you force your daughter to read more poetry, because she is just moving through a circle of bad writing habits at this point in time that inexcusable, really, she needs to read poetry, a lot of powerful poetry Welsh, Italian, French, Rimbaud, Dylan thomas, poe, Ezra pound, Jack kerouak because her poetry is suffering from a close minded selfish neglect that few recover from, and no poet should do that to poetry ever whether it's their own or not.
Keep it up - don"t stop now!
I'm awed. Don't stop, don't stop! (Wow)
My sister-in-law is narcoleptic.
You sunuvagun. 10