You naughty boy.

Bloody marvellous but the term Tsunami is over baking the Spotted Dick im my humble opinion. As ever though your work is an asset to this site. May I offer you an 8 I/T, would that be okay?

Okay - you've either sent, or tried to send your man, your mother-in-law, a child, and yourself to eternal rest. Give it a rest.

you really conveyed the hope\helplessness and the uselessness of the emptiness in this guys soul.

You have a way of moving people to wherever you write about.

What can I say huh? this is what you do best and its a silky read your a true maestro at this stuff, fuck the haiku stick to freeform this is where your awesome. Aint Cathy a bitch ?

Listen man, stop reading Barb Cartland get out into the MAtrix and spread your virus elsewhere this is as bad as a blow job from 10 years of marriage. 0

I remember reading your poems a long time ago and though they were inspiring you REALLY are the cat in silk pajamas now. I'll keep this real: this rocks

permutation.

reading this made me feel like I've eaten to many sweets. Far too immature and full of cliches, sorry its pants.

Beautifuly written, the attention to detail is astounding and I loved the message here and I think we miss it in our everyday lives, I love the way you write, are you married?

Bar a few there is some fine poems on the current entries today, this is no exception and the delivery of each line has a message and I loved it. But do punks really sneer?

Beautifully enticing in its description, you have me wowed.8

This one put me right there in it.

*piffy*

yes i like the structure, and rhyming fingers and nimbus is genius well done

yes I agree this is kind of wild and it works well But I do think the word crimson in poetry should be banned Other than that good

Bold as ever, perhaps a little alice in wonderland in its focus on detail and fantasy Perhaps try making it a bit shorter brevity and wit and all