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horus8 on Flash of Light by Todd 14 Apr 2003, 1:06 PM

What if heaven is under the hat and below the belt, Todd? In heaven will you look like you did when you died, when you were born, or when you thought you looked your best in highschool. Perhaps you will be a ball of preaching lightning for us to follow into your simplified evangelical program. I've never seen so many people in one place convinced that heaven is a country buffet with domesticated lions, tigers and bears, and everyone looking their Sunday best. I'll bring my 'crock of shit pot' and bingo card. See you there.

thepinkbunnyofdoom on a 9,000.00$ Philippine script treatment by Shardik 14 Apr 2003, 1:02 PM

Nice screen play. It seems to center more on Emilio than Ferdinand tho. So why is Ferdinand the PRINCIPAL CHARACTER?

thepinkbunnyofdoom on Friends by anitawit 14 Apr 2003, 12:50 PM

A few typos(i didn't take off for them but they are there). Other than that nothing that really makes it stand out, but its still good. -7-

thepinkbunnyofdoom on You by adrenalize 14 Apr 2003, 12:47 PM

well said -7-

thepinkbunnyofdoom on Flash of Light by Todd 14 Apr 2003, 12:45 PM

To best see the light one must stand in shadow

d35 on Sweet Oblivious by daryash-koh 14 Apr 2003, 9:43 AM

hmmm...not quite sure what to say

d35 on turd cutter by Count Flatula 14 Apr 2003, 9:41 AM

lol funny

Ranger on What Hobbit songs are really like... by Bobjim 14 Apr 2003, 8:53 AM

I believe that you have just attained your highest score yet!

Ranger on Dear flatulance (dear lord) by Bobjim 14 Apr 2003, 8:51 AM

I would have given this a ten but...oh, no I wouldn't.

kalikopeli on SHE TRIES by calilegzzz 14 Apr 2003, 7:21 AM

very nice...mabe i would have worded it differently so that it would have a better flow. eg. "will she find her way through all this confusion and hurt?" .... seems too wordy too me. what do you think? dr.

wEdible Underpantsw on Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome by Stephen Robins 14 Apr 2003, 5:16 AM

Last year I made speech on social policy in the Rijksmuseum with Rembrandt's great painting of the Night Watch as backdrop. Today I find myself in the magnificent Ridderzaal at the heart of Dutch democracy, reading this great poem aloud to the people of Holland. They clap and sigh.

wFraser Allonby Q.C.w on Severe Acute Respiratory Syndrome by Stephen Robins 14 Apr 2003, 5:08 AM

This is splendid. Poems about diseases always seem to bring out the best in people.

calilegzzz replying on all in my head by calilegzzz 14 Apr 2003, 2:17 AM

What the hell is brown sticky nappy?

calilegzzz replying on all in my head by calilegzzz 14 Apr 2003, 2:16 AM

yea, I am afraid i am stuck in basic, i am working on it though, thank you for the feed back.

calilegzzz replying on all in my head by calilegzzz 14 Apr 2003, 2:15 AM

thank you for your kind words, I am always nervours when any of my poems go public, (fear of rejection) (teeheehee) anyway thank you!

calilegzzz replying on all in my head by calilegzzz 14 Apr 2003, 2:13 AM

thank you for the feed back, I enjoy when someone makes me look at my stuff and do a little thinking.

Mr Pig (again) on To My Grave by Bonehiss 14 Apr 2003, 12:54 AM

Are you Caducus? you write quite similar. Liked this my boy good show.

Mr Pig (again) on No Easy Way To Be Free by Bonehiss 14 Apr 2003, 12:52 AM

I enjoyed reading this stylised poem but my interest somewhat waned as its far far too long. You write passionately, one can see that but it felt like an endurance test.

Cali replying on You Left Me by Cali 13 Apr 2003, 11:19 PM

ummm if plagiarised means copied im a bit in a pisst off mood coz like i wrote dat....I want it back up a.s.a.p and send da person who has made the complaint to me

nolan replying on and i don't even care by nolan 13 Apr 2003, 9:34 PM

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