Not a bad effort but the chorus is so long per line it would be nightmare singing it without dying from lack of breath. My good friend (cough) poetandknowit is very interested in how you, me, and ranger and all us 'pimple poets' write in the style we do. I hope you can help him its a shame he has issues and I'm worried about him like I worry about what aftershave I should wear for work...7 (it needs to be downsized for a lyric). Horus is the lyricmeister you need his comments.

P.S.: Shouldn't the last line be: 'You're nothing but a prawne'?

Blabitt, though I still think you're an annoying twerp, I can't help but cheer you on here. This isiot sounds like he doesn't even listen to CNN, just to Rumsfeld and co. And even then. This amuses me greatly. And by the way, Blindreject or whateveryournameis, could you answer this? (Admittedly, I know what you'll say, but I'd like to see if you're silly enough to say it.) The Bible wasn't written down until four or five hundred years after Christ was executed (as, quite frankly, in some ways he desered). Surely even you know how quickly a word-of-mouth tale gets changed from the truth. What happens to the Bible then? Next: offer me proof that Mahomet wasn't, as he said he was, the next prophet, after Abraham Moses, Daniel, Jesu and the like. And don't give me the Son of God argument. Megalomania in a prophet isn't proof of anything. (And don't get into long spiels about what Islam is about unless you've read the Koran.) Lastly: even the Puritans who set up the damn States (in the sense of colonised the lands, not creating the country) -- fleeing from England in the name of religious freedom and whipping Quakers out from teir midst -- had to admit that the Bible ouldn't be taken literally, in the end. Learn from your ancestors, little boy. Even if your President can't. (But then, who believes the man actually learnt how to read before he became president?)

Oh, and if you did not hear me the first time: SHUT THE FUCK UP!

hahahahahahahahaha. No, wait. hahahahahahaha. Are you really that shallow? Do you really follow dogma to the point where you become a brick wall? Because I call you a religious freak, which you are, just read what you write, you assume I am 1) not Christian and 2) agnostic. Do you really know what either of these mean. Where did you learn to sound like a fucking Mormon on a bike? You parents? Sunday school? Because some book? You sound like a confused boy. Your arguments do not even make sense because you have no real idea of what the world is like outside of your home, school, church. So you come up with these god knows what ideas of the world and the current events you see on CNN and how it all work in some wacky moral sense and then you come to a website that is for poetry and start rambling this campy crap you pass for a theology. Sorry. Sounds like a sham in your shallow words.

again, thank you for making my point for me. you have my permission to pray for my soul. you might as well pray for p&k's too, just because i know it'll piss him off.

Thanx

Please, for the love of your screwy god, take your religious nonsense and your 12 year old mentality and SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You sound like a brainwashed teenage idiot! Oh, sorry, you are a teenaged brainwashed idiot.