poetandknowit
replying on Attention! - To the Wondering Soul by darkhelmet10
2 Apr 2003, 9:16 AM
Wow, you are hot when you talk dirty.
I read you poems because they seem to be all over the most recent poems when I come here. Please, stop writing. It would help me out a great deal. Then I could focus all my efforts on seducing Razorgirl away from Shin now that Limonade has left me to my own devices and my broken heart has somewhat healed. Plus, you get so emotional and it is quite fun to watch you bubble. You should read my poems because you would learn something.
LoL, I won't venture off and talk about poetandknowit, lol, but thankz for your comment, and I know I need to revise it, and when I get a chance I"m going to see if I can find a site that shows how a lyric should all be set up so I can work on this one more, and fix it up. My next adventure is going to try to write a Haiku (if that is how you spell it) but we'll see, I think it's kinda funny yet 'educational' to try new things like that :P But thanx agian Caducus and good luck with things :)
This is a brown sticky nappy. 3
Basic as hell but I liked the way you worked the theme and its quite grand
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I have contacted Dr A SShole who assures me he can give me 38 stitches on the crack of my srse to prevent this from happening.
how's about white russians? Besides, love and hate are so close, I think P&K just secretly wants into your pants. watch your back.
You swallow.
*psst* Hey, cockfoster. According to the demented ravings of a bunch of obsolete desert tribes, a whole ass-load of things are sins. Things like wearing clothes made of more than one kind of fiber. Your Poly-Cotton blend is really a ticket to eternal HELL! Also, you can legally buy slaves from neighbouring nations. Sooo..going for the mexicans or going to pick up some canadians? If you haven't noticed, there's some pretty fucked up suggestions in that book. As for homosexuality, there's a good degree of controversy on the matter. Personally, I think Jesu fucked the apostles, loving all people equally. Hey, you know what the bible says you can have sex with? close family! Ask Moses, Noah and plenty others! Actually, that goes a long way in explaining you, blindasshat. Actually, for what it's worth, if you killed my family, I would toss you a nickel and bid you good day. Tell me, do you really think the gov't is here to protect you? Tell that to the good folks behind the eugenics boards, the Tuskegee experiments, the testing of psychoactive drugs on an unsuspecting public, my dead second cousin who was exposed to Agent Orange in Vietnam and the people who are continuing to support racist, sexist, homophobic and utterly backward and repressive stategies to keep your pathetic country placid and terrified. On the upside, it would be a one-stop trip. Now, take the insane ramblings of your masochistic death cult and kindly go crucify yourself. Hugs 'n' heretical kisses!
i dont know exactly what it is about this one...but i do believe that it just may be the best poem of yours that i have ever read. in my whole entire lifetime. the whole entire 16 years. ((16!!!:)) yeah i think i would give it a SEVENTEEN. damn restrictions
It may look like a group hug but we're strangling each other and its all evens. Razorgrin please dont bother to resuscitate me (unless you've been drinking cheap whiskey) then do please.
I think you're being controlled by the Bavarian Illuminati. Wrap your head in tinfoil and be sure not to leave air holes. The whole world is watching, dude!
I think this should be read to all new pupils at secondary school followed up by lessons on how not to drive whilst contracting the virus.
Group hugs.
PAKI, just reading these comments does it not say something to you? I do like this poem and I'm on record saying it but I think your comments piss people off to extremes. You wont change and neither will I, but we're a pair of fools arguing, it can all be avoided from my part not reacting and your part being a wanker in the way you comment. We both couldn't give a shit about each other at the end of the day but you still read my poems for reasons only you know, I can only read yours once I know you've dropped down from the high horse. So whatdowedo?
To be fair I liked this, the length is just right for what you have conveyed. line 4/5 is said articulately even though its cliched, and I tip my hat to you on this one and vote you a 9.
(please carry on being a bastard I quite like it now).
Astonishingly poor, this didnt pop my pimple at all.
cack
Cool Ending