Blindproject217
replying on Attention! - To the Wondering Soul by darkhelmet10
1 Apr 2003, 2:13 PM
1. While God did not physically pick up a pen and write the bible it is said by God himself that he inspired it through his disciples. Jesus(who is the same person as God) said "these are my words" meaning the bible. And that whole five scholars theory is flawed, because those five all have different views and separate ideas of God or the world. The disciples who wrote Gods word were all on a common ground, they believed in God and gave up their lives to tell the masses about him. As a side note, if you believe that God is all knowing and is capable of everything than what makes you think that he would let something in the Bible that he did not condone.
2. God told Moses to go and destroy cities that were unholy, he even commanded Moses to kill the women and children because they themselves were also wicked. The children were rebellious, the women were impure and prostitutes, God even told him to kill the livestock. When I read this I was shocked, I could not understand why a loving God would kill innocent children. Well the point is they were not innocent, they were wicked and God knew when they grew up they would try and avenge their fathers by killing the Jews. God even said if you can find even one righteous person I will spare the city, and Moses could not. You say God does not advocate war?! We, America, are not even that harsh. We are trying with all our power to make sure that innocent civilians are not harmed, many of our own men have died trying to help Iraqâs citizens. And yes I do call my self a Christian, I am a fighter of evil(something people do not believe in anymore), I do not strive for war, but I know it is necessary. You believe that we should not have avenged out innocent civilians on 9-11? What would you do if I killed your family? would you press charges? Or would you just let it go? If I decided that I wanted to kill you, would you try and prevent it? or just wait for it to happen. You donât want us to attack Iraq because nothing has happened to you, I guarantee if it was someone you loved in those buildings that died you would be fronting this war with everything inside you. Nothing has touched your little world, your inside your house, something alot of people do not have. You can protest laws you dissagree with, somthing most people can not do. And most of all, you are free. Free to live the way you want. That is a privilege every human being should have. If you were living under tyranny would you want what we have? Our president doesnât spray chemical weapons on our towns, and watch as hundreds of women and children slowly and painfully die. Our government is here to protect us, and we, with the power and wealth that we have, owe it to the rest of the world, if willing, to free them.
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Jesus loves a sinner?
lame,why did we bother
DIE THEN AT LEAST THEN,THEN IT SHALL BE OVER YOU IMMATURE PASSION FLOOZY THAT YET HAS EVRYTHING TO LEARN OF LOVE.
HERE MY DARLIN IS A HINT
no true love is one way, nor a compition,ROMANTIC LOVE is built up over time.
It is also a posistive,there is no love in being dead.
BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BORED NOW
2 much suicidal crap in poetry, try something new.Still you inspired me 2 write make me smile.A good first go.Dont be so obvious with it.
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Haiku
The haiku is a japanese poetry form, evolved from the renga during the 16th century. It is a three line, unrhymed set of seventeed syllables (5-7-5).
It is typically a pair of contrasting concrete/sensory images, with each image so dependant on the other that the whole thing collapses if one word is altered.
Thankz rockin, I've never wrote a lyric before and I was in school today and started to wirte a poem and it ended up in a lyric, I will re-write and spell check it all when I get a chance but I did publish this in school, I work a lot now so sometimes it's a little hard. But in other words, Thank you for your comment :)
my first clue that this might not rock my world was that the title was spelled wrong...and i dont know, its okay, but it just seems like more of the "oh poor suicidal me lets see if i can cut myself deeper and feel better" crap that im getting sick of. plus you spelled several things wrong. however, your rhyme scheme is pretty good, its not too incredibly forced, and you do have several really good lines in there. i bet that with a little rewriting this could be extremely awesome...for now...5
Actually could someone explaine to me what is Haiku? I'm not sure how the patterens for them go. But blind I'm not going to rate you since I don't know the patterens for Haiku, but I do like them :)
:) I'll give you a :)
No, you can't. But now I'd really like to see a chessy greeting card--what exactly would that be?
I beg to differ. I don't think you can be the worst haiku ever if you aren't actually a haiku.
Now, Christof's attempt, while it DOES have the correct syllabification, is just too damn fun to say for it to be the worst ever.
I'm sorry, this is painfully bad.
I'm still not here either, despite my somewhat well-covered semi-exposed affections. Hmph.
This poeme was the written equivalent of saltpeter. Dampened my libido for what may be several hours. Boo. In the meantime, lick this zero.
It is beautiful...but...It seems unfinished.