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hipster flare on Hippy's Ode to Eternity by bondjedi 13 Mar 2003, 9:31 AM
title stinks. first two lines are great. last is lacking.
hipster flare on Crucifixion by Mr Pig 13 Mar 2003, 9:30 AM
I like wine and bread, too.
hipster flare on Missing You by psychedelic 13 Mar 2003, 9:28 AM
get rid of addressing the reader as "you", and escape from the ordinary in line 2.
hipster flare on Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer 13 Mar 2003, 9:27 AM
grandpa liked moonshine, didn't he?
hipster flare on Tears For You by mckenzie 13 Mar 2003, 9:22 AM
craftless. try again.
INTRANSIT on sexy by elizabethann 13 Mar 2003, 7:55 AM
iron out the telling spots. this can fly.
Frass on Icarus Down by horus8 13 Mar 2003, 7:47 AM
I like it, H8; but spell it 'Separating'.
Frass on Blustered by INTRANSIT 13 Mar 2003, 7:45 AM
I like it just the way it is, INTRNST
INTRANSIT on Charm by OneFingerAnswer 13 Mar 2003, 7:44 AM
Something very intriguing about the v-form. I can't figure its purpose quite yet.
INTRANSIT on Small Teeth in a Glass Bowl by Fear of Garbage 13 Mar 2003, 7:41 AM
Just for the heck of it, roll this into a villanelle. good as is.
lastobelus on The Courtesan by horus8 13 Mar 2003, 7:40 AM
softy. sniff.
lastobelus on Dust by Caducus 13 Mar 2003, 7:31 AM
very nice, first stanza rocks & the yourself more self repetition is brill. pickety-snickety: should in the quill not be with the quill?
lastobelus on Assassin Nation by Blue Magpie 13 Mar 2003, 6:54 AM
bah the universe couldn't care less whether we oppress or progress or transgress but with every breath it is only to death it demands that we all acquiesce
lastobelus on What Have You Swallowed by Fear of Garbage 13 Mar 2003, 6:47 AM
intricate and fractal. perhaps one day you can tell me what it means, for now I am content to turn it over and over in my hands and puzzle, watching for the light glinting off elusive facets.
INTRANSIT on The Courtesan by horus8 13 Mar 2003, 6:23 AM
ok.
lastobelus on Fate by Dostoyevsky 13 Mar 2003, 6:08 AM
jingle jangle, words to mangle hist'ry with my shit be-spangle fate really doesn't give a fuck 'bout anything, it's all just luck
lastobelus on i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america 13 Mar 2003, 5:59 AM
it's a great poem but I still have to limerick you: I think "lost in america"'s lost and would be wheree'r he was tossed he skipped Bangledesh and some chick's willing flesh because of the cultural cost.
lastobelus replying on The Kansas City Chiefs suck by Jeremi B. Handrinos 13 Mar 2003, 5:54 AM
hoho, now... toy rocker's still rocking his toy as he has since he was a small boy it never gets sore but demands ever more until rocker must both hands deploy horus descends and preys like a hawk on po-ems he thinks are a crock is this god of birds a master of words? or just some guy wacking his cock! bawaahahahahahahahaha the Regurgitationist tackles Masturbatory Poetics
lastobelus replying on On coming across a field of deer one afternoon (2) by <~> 13 Mar 2003, 4:51 AM
refers i believe to the camouflaged deer disappearing into the like-coloured landscape. clever.
OneFingerAnswer replying on Charm by OneFingerAnswer 13 Mar 2003, 3:29 AM
Yes it is late. That's where my typo came in too. Yeah I wanted to ask you for help on something, I'm not one who loves the phome though... maybe e-mail? crzyhorse18@yahoo or msn.com. I check both at least once a day.