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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on UNTITLED by bxjay170 13 Mar 2003, 10:26 AM
BEFORE YOU CONSIDER WRITING POETRY, TRY MASTERING THE ABILITY TO MASTER THE ABILITY TO WRITE COHERENT SENTENCES IN PLAIN ENGLISH. BECAUSE IF WE CAN'T EVEN DO THAT RIGHT, HOW CAN WE POSSIBLY HOPE TO TACKLE THE PROBLEM OF INFLATION? HOW CAN WE SOLVE EDUCATION? AND HOW CAN WE EVEN BEGIN TO DEAL WITH THE "COULDN'T CARE LESS" ATTITUDE THAT IS SO DEEPLY ROOTED IN THE FABRIC OF MODERN SOCIETY? I DON'T PRETEND TO HAVE ALL THE ANSWERS. I DON'T EVEN PRETEND TO WEAR UNDERPANTS. DO YOU?
lastobelus on Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum 13 Mar 2003, 10:24 AM
one 9 worth of delicious absurdity.
lastobelus on advice for the heated by <~> 13 Mar 2003, 10:16 AM
oh you voyeur you
hipster flare on advice for the heated by <~> 13 Mar 2003, 9:54 AM
cute and suggestive.
hipster flare on You'd think by ~incarnate~ 13 Mar 2003, 9:53 AM
4-6-6 ? Do over.
hipster flare on The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer 13 Mar 2003, 9:52 AM
work out redundancies...
lastobelus on The Bloody War Of Angels by Caducus 13 Mar 2003, 9:52 AM
sweet s/there/their/ in stanza 3 line 3 before pk gets here and craps my nitpicks: stanza 2 line 1 bugs me because its awkward. why not just something like angels trick the cherubs into killing the stars. or angels corrupt the cherubs and they start killing stars. or something. and stanza 4 line 1. The rest of the poem is startlingly original, making "eyes bleed black" stand out for it's familiarity.
hipster flare on this can be no more than shit by Crakyamuni 13 Mar 2003, 9:48 AM
weak
hipster flare on Stuck in the Past... by loneshadow29 13 Mar 2003, 9:47 AM
somebody bored? Don't like history class?
hipster flare on Pinjur by Shardik 13 Mar 2003, 9:46 AM
god with a small i. catchy.
hipster flare on Shadow's First Attempt at Haiku by loneshadow29 13 Mar 2003, 9:45 AM
keep trying. avaoid cliche's that sound like elton john songs.
hipster flare on Coloured waifs home by horus8 13 Mar 2003, 9:44 AM
OK
hipster flare on Got Balls? by Yardbird 13 Mar 2003, 9:42 AM
tasty. sounds chewy.
Caducus replying on The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams by Caducus 13 Mar 2003, 9:41 AM
Its al about living and not just existing, learning from there life and making sure you avoid the footsteps as they can lead you in to the same path of parasites she met.
hipster flare on Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum 13 Mar 2003, 9:41 AM
what a chewy lumpo of dung. also not a haiku.
hipster flare on Litany of the Mullet by Shin-Bojangles 13 Mar 2003, 9:39 AM
I get it.
hipster flare on Beer by Yardbird 13 Mar 2003, 9:38 AM
the title gives too much away and makes it ordinary.
Caducus replying on Dust by Caducus 13 Mar 2003, 9:36 AM
yes it should so thank you for noticing.
hipster flare on Loud Taps by celiff 13 Mar 2003, 9:34 AM
title must go--eliminate redundancies--haiku is too short for repetition.
hipster flare on Aries, the God of war by Shardik 13 Mar 2003, 9:33 AM
hooving rams crash horns