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Haiku № 42676

Loud Taps

by celiff

Member since 2003 · Posted 5 Mar 2003 · 4 comments

Rain is a Tap Dance Tap, Tap, Tap upon my brow Boom, claps the thunder

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4 comments

[0] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Mar-03/9:52 PM Reply
Great! I love the way you take seemingly inert elements of nature and give them a vibrant personality! TOOT (Ten out of ten)!!!
[0] TanHand 5-Mar-03/10:40 PM Reply
This reminds me of this one time in the bathroom stall I was tapping the divider...TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP I know ur in there lol TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP holmes, homeslice TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP TAP then he shot himself in the face like in Full Metal Jacker. Pie-Ull! KABLAM! Get it??
[7] Robert K Foster 7-Mar-03/7:52 AM Reply
how kindergarten like. I bet kids would love this--nice rhythm and simplicity... bad title, though.
[6] hipster flare 13-Mar-03/9:34 AM Reply
title must go--eliminate redundancies--haiku is too short for repetition.