poemranker ::I wish... by Jai

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Free verse № 48697

I wish...

Member since 2003 · Posted 7 May 2003 · 3 comments

I wish I could take back the mistakes I made, I wish we could laugh and have fun like we used too, I wish you could see how much I care for you, I wish you would realize that I am the one for you, I wish you could want me as much as I want you, I wish my wish would come true.

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3 comments

[0] horus8 7-May-03/7:20 PM Reply
Honestly? I enjoyed very much how you rhymed too with three you's, but then, finished off with a true. Staggering, and very suspenseful. I'll raise you one zero blue vote, and see you a green one.
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8-May-03/1:26 AM Reply
I wish I could break your face.
[9] tre 2-Apr-04/9:04 AM Reply
i get it completely, simple though