lastobelus
on oedipus is raising a pint to me now by <~>
13 Mar 2003, 1:00 PM
ha, very clever.
no. you miss, here. 'my time is coming' is a decade (at least) too aged for I.
so I flew from you
and became what i hated:
stay away from my underpants, girl
lest you end like the last little pearl
she made her survey
but was frightened away
by the man-thing she caused to unfurl
Perhaps you are thinking of it's twin icarus up? or is it the present tense on seperating were as it used to be seperated or is it the new haiku above it, or all of the above?
no! you have undone it, h! some thing has been lost, here. <sigh>
whore.
My real father was a dark angel, an incubi. That's why i'm supermany and have perfect nails and hairs.
tonight, dark angel's cleaning out his closet.
snap back to reality, dark angel. Get back to your old rhapsody.
(yo, just kidding, I never meant to hurt yo-ouo-ouou)
what the hell is that DISposed to mean?
I like your use of the words "really sexy" to make the poeme seem really sexy. Also, great job throwing "scarred arms" in there. Poetry is always so much more profound when scars are involved. It's just that they're so deep, and so beautiful. Yes. You heard me. I said "beautiful". Because my scars ARE beautiful. They say more about me than Eminem ever could.
what the hell is that supposed to mean? I actually didn't vote on this pome, just used it to stroke my limerick bone. Because I'm sarcastic I'm also alone, but I don't shout, whine, promulgate depression or moan.
THINK. FEEL... EXPLORE.
Zoran Djindjic - such a poetic name.
Im not sure 'sexy' isn't your thing. I mean a bald beautiful girl in mens clothing can be pretty down-right sexy. Think about this some more, actually don't think...feel.
are you SUBverting YOUR voting?
ARE YOU INVERTING YOUR VOTING AGAIN? YOU FUCKER.
definitely needs a limerick:
bxjay shouts over a moan
'bout how much he feels all alone
if he "seattled" his soul
he'd get out of his hole
and so, to the west coast he's flown