horus8
on our little secret by famenglory
12 Mar 2003, 1:55 AM
if you weren't crippled and counting herpes i'd stick your fucking organ up your ass without your trusty shoehorn james. 4 wheeldrive is better then two.
Jealousy + nudity = sophia Loren perching headfirst above my pounding shaft.
Somethings are possible.
Dream a little dream to earn your jealous scream.
I have some butterfly stitches you could model ricky.
horus8
replying on Anna N. Smiths vagina monologue in Evangelistic tongues by horus8
12 Mar 2003, 1:44 AM
Yeah idiot, i think that's pretty much what the poem said smart guy!
wow!!! for me? thanks, very creative :)
There once was some aids in a Newbie,
Who suckled it out of a Doobie.
In terror he cried,
"Oh no! I shall die!
And I've never seen any Boobies!"
wow another 10 :P thanks
thank you for the comment, will think about that :)
all the hoopla is well deserved
i too am a sucker for illiterations, and you are there!
ee cummings come uppens!
feels like a stream of memory still blaring.
i can see these hues.
No. One too many 'at his feet"s.
Try to wean out the things that sound poetic; focus on the idea that inspired the poem instead. this could be cut in half, and be better still. Besides, you are just responding to my voice. You like it. No one likes their own, at first. Remember the first time you heard yourself recorded? How strange it sounded? How you cringed? It is much like that. Be certain. Fill nothiung. Pare away. Marianne Moore said that poetry is about real frogs in imaginary gardens. Show me warts and mucous! I want to smell the musk, the mud.
I have looked at your other poems, and I am not certain what you were trying to do with them, so I shall leave them un-commented-upon.
You prolly have nothing going in your life which prolly explains why you're online all the time. Sadly, I don't have much time to be in front of my comuter all day. I really have more important things to do in my life that can be more rewarding than being online all the time.