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horus8 replying on i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america 7 Mar 2003, 11:30 PM
Frozen justification? I didn't know they wired the mammoth to talk? Interesting. You ever see Ringo Starr in that Caveman movie? Funny shite, mang.
horus8 replying on i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america 7 Mar 2003, 11:26 PM
Sir, are you mad dogging the mob? Perhaps i am conducting an experiment. What if i said part of me likes this poem, and part of me hates it. The good news is the best comment you got was from da. your problem is right there. In other words, the style and structure is completely gauche, and artisticaly 'safe' Either go total concrete, or make the structure serve your words and story here, because that's where the good shit is. Here's a ten. Now Skiddadal. I never said you had to like anything. I'm just messing around with new theories of and within communication, lacking audio, and visual identification upon a computer. This was only a test.
horus8 on Keanu Vs The mystery of life by Shardik 7 Mar 2003, 11:17 PM
Oh Shardik... You trap baiter you. Must your mind live at the Cirkle K Try Chapstick from my ass You know? I just love Oprah. Want a Chocodile?
horus8 on Unholy War by marvelis 7 Mar 2003, 9:52 PM
I never knew there was a holy war?
Yes, I know. It troubles me too. We should do something about it! You know? Clean up this filthy town... Whatta yeah say? I hear this scoundrel Bachus has gone mad... Apparently with a kale gun at the private school. In the private boys shavery. We can only hope they're all not vegetarian pussys. Coming up with off the cuff degeneratively rude chirpings like that. The nerve. All over my chesapeke chaps and scarf. Mother fuckers. We don't need no stinking badges. Hey lets count this. It could be a 69 er!c
Freethinker1602 replying on hehehe by Freethinker1602 7 Mar 2003, 7:42 PM
see time and time again I see the only way to truly resolve something is to take the negative force out of the equation. Being evil people should just vanish. It's really the simplest alternative. Plus I wrote this and then I thought. Wow. I don't need to be around people. Huh. Yay. I've left them. yet they still have me
I may lose my "cool", but I like this poem. Yes sir, I like it a bunch. wunderbar! oktoberfest! midnite madness!
Bill Z Bub replying on i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america 7 Mar 2003, 7:38 PM
Frankingstein? That's not right, you fool! It's Frankenberry. Any literate cereal-box collector can tell you that. Sheezlouise. me and count chocula got drunk one night and painted frankenberry green. that was a time of carefree drunken carefree memory and gallons of milk that we drowned that damned annoying booberry in. hey, cap'n crunch stole my hustler.
Bill Z Bub on Fingers 'Round My Heart by Wulf 7 Mar 2003, 7:11 PM
download commencing in 5...4...3...2...1... ERROR...ERROR... oh well. what's on teevee, Stinkyfuzzpaws? mmmmlove.
Bill Z Bub on hehehe by Freethinker1602 7 Mar 2003, 7:09 PM
blackholes have feelings too. oh, wait, no they don't.
~sigh~ young love and longing, the burning crush of simple incompleteness and a tender lust. and here I am in my cell unbreakable bands of spacetime to overcome in teaspoonfulls. here is a number from a hat.
Bill Z Bub on Unholy War by marvelis 7 Mar 2003, 7:00 PM
barely... ...nice sentiment, though. THUS SPEAKS THE MAN FROM CANUCKISTAN
you superstar under par jamie farr corca colar one night spent in zanzibar thats whut this generation needs. i fuckinsuck. hypercrit me. Iron maiden rocks the third world. here's ten cents for a new tent, sven.
Bill Z Bub replying on alienheart by Bill Z Bub 7 Mar 2003, 6:48 PM
Shit, I just gave a listen to thorn apple the baby fat. ace! ace! triple ace! [In retrospect, the value of the Buddha's ministry is beyond the need for latent states, host-parasite relationships including disease mechanism.]
INTRANSIT on first kiss by lost in america 7 Mar 2003, 5:06 PM
I rather like it as-is
Maybe, Someday, Saved by zero.
Straight over my head.1.
So let me get this straight, toby. Considering you seem to be about 100 different people in your head clique and wired many ranking powers, am I to believe that the only way I can get any real advice around this place is if I like all of your poems. What an interesting policy. And If I accidentally do not like one of the poems you wrote under any number of your user names I am to be labeled numerous form of creative profanity because you cannot seem to take any sort of criticism. Well okay then, just give me a list of all your people and I will give them all good tidings! lol.
lost in america on Unholy War by marvelis 7 Mar 2003, 3:31 PM
Lots of cliches. Lots of them.
lost in america replying on Keanu Vs The mystery of life by Shardik 7 Mar 2003, 3:28 PM
Okay, quickdraw, you are right. I will go back and try to add depth that is not beneath you.