is zzinnia a gazelle or a cheetah? a grazer or a cheater? a flower or a peter?

yes, yesssss.

This is Metaphysics. something you can't erase as easily as your past.now all mine to play with. The power of your words losing their virginity and turning into the inevitable sign that says 'no vacancy'. I love macs. 20-Feb-03, 07:00 PM From the picture you send me of Nadine, looks like she is the only one shopping at K Mart...and please do something with her hair and her face...haha.... Someone who always judges people on the way they look and look at who you are with... YOu are a fucking joke. Reply X horus8 20-Feb-03, 07:23 PM Why oh lord when i'm on 'vail' (a term thast jesus is not familiar with) don't they love me too. is it my future wife's mullet... is it my kmart shopping sprees.. i fear it's the jokes i tell lord...the unfunny ones about my evil ways with the brown holes and not the off pink ones. it must be my judging of judges who are judging judge judy. perhaps it's the last pudding container in my vegetable crisper. oh lord fill my love seat (tight tan ass) with the holiest of spirits and bring salve, please. Reply X Ornella Muti 20-Feb-03, 07:10 PM You're a liar. Why did you tell me you got a commercial? What's the point of lying to me? So you look cool. Please, once again, quite pathetic. I know you're dirt poor. Looking at your wife's mullet it's self evident. So when are you gonna suck some dick? Let me know. I can refer you to some wealthy gay men. I'll collect 10%. Ciao bisexlual lover. Reply X horus8 20-Feb-03, 07:17 PM Why oh lord must i get the big pay back... is not my homosexuality and blatant drug addictions and life of nomadic instability without parents not enough?...oh lord, must i be swallowed by herman Melvilles fat assed wicked step daughter's fish too...will they come and remove my microwave and juicer sweet lordy... do they know that last week i came close to getting three commercials just like the week before that and the week before that? why was i a bad boy sweet jesus.? why did i feed the stray mutt? i would repent, but i'm in to much pain too... notice how hard it is for me to even write my thoughts...lord when you made me the evil one why did you not tell me that i would be getting the big rock hard drug coated pay backs, oh lovely god... was it the beauty of my tight buns...the whiteness of my dense perfect smirk...i want you to know lordy..nothing has changed here? in fact i'm getting ten extra channels on tv and my mail is delivered dry and not wet, my hamock is even swinging slower but i know that the pain is there somewhere...with my missing furniture..the pain is in my lonely...loveseat. it has been laid on while i was...sleeping, now my chairs stained and just a mess, and i feel a tear a brewing. my peccavi's were selfish, just like yours sweet jesu. i fear my loveseat is now ruinedu Reply X Ornella Muti 20-Feb-03, 07:33 PM I hate you more than anything, and I fucking don't want to talk to you anymore. But I am sure you can discuss metaphysics with Nadine. Don't forget to think of me whne you make love to her (like you used to say) Farewell lover, TR Reply X horus8 20-Feb-03, 07:46 PM I have never discussed metaphysics with you or her. why would that interest me? a hamster can't be taught to think like a bird. they do not sing...they run in wheels. i hope your farewell is excrusciatingly pleasant, and you would of course be the last person i thought of while making love. even settle dressed up like my mother would cross my mind before that would (use to say? by the way...Nadines not from Texas (lol), can you imagine how long me and her laughed at your message the other day (where did you get texas? we don't even know anyone in texas, she's from e. la, genius..we both just looked at eachother and then laughed for hours i actually have to thank you...we are closer now)... i have told her everything. today, i even auditioned for miller geniune draft...i've always thought of myself as more of a miller guy anyway. So... that all said. Game over. you lose. Really there were no winners or losers just a soiled loveseat and an eviction notice. Reply X horus8 20-Feb-03, 07:48 PM And just like that life goes on, and yes tanya getting over you was as easy as getting on top of you. farewell.

well, there is much that can be said of ostrich egg-over-easy, as 'tis no mean feat to ease one over. outsky? as for the shiny copper nails, i think a coil would suit thee better, tesla-ated and free for the asking, and used to fry thr aforementioned dejeuner. sur l'herbe. nekkid. fiend. exhale now, ski. p.s. the horned beast has an eye for thy horn, and a tooth for tutelage. 8

lactating while you weep is very becoming. i gave you the blue one.

it's good, but the imagery confuses me >7

i really like it, i can see this city, but it's hard for me to grasp the theme >8

I love the last line. I can picture it, you know the look on his face as he's trying to swallow. Wonderful.

WOW. This is great. I love it. Must have a better title. "Revelation" or pick up the damn book and take a look at that last chapter, just flip the pages, a title might just pop out at you. How would you feel about taking out 'the'in L2? It would bring the count short by one, but it would make up for it in content. What do you think?

The forty nights were spent in the desert months before the resurrection. Again the title doesn't jive for me. I think the haiku works very well intil the last line. Too preachy. Tell me something nuetral at the end, to give the blood more power.

Hmmm, it was the jews who laughed, the romans were completely uninterested. I prefer blood to wine, though the tie in with supper is a good one. The title invokes a different scene. Right a haiku about the action in the title, keep this one and give it a different title. Judas is one of my favorite characters in this myth. Keep exploring him. Have you seen The Last Temptation of Christ?

Horus is right!