Bachus
on THE NO NO by Garrett S Sexton
17 Feb 2003, 2:19 PM
Hey! high five, up high, down low.
CAMEL-TOE.
I'm amazed you can even tie your shoes, let alone concentrate all of your magical powers to bury the east coast in a blanket of your racist demeanor. pickle chin.
Technically this is fine. I personally don't like the content. Maybe poetry is supposed to evoke a reaction, but I guess that explains my rating.
Perfect, again.
Wonderful. 8
I like the edit except for st. 6. I gave you a ten last time and stanza 3 more than equals that.
Superb(e)!
Nice images, but strikes me as a personal remembrance, or at least one I don't have personal context for.
Furcke...
Oh, you. 9.
brrrrrrrrill.
You can thank me for the ten in person, with chives.
Okay don't look it up. Whatever flips your pancake.
I think not.
Nice Indeed.
Wow... I thought that I'd never agree with D.A. but please do shut up.
This needs work."Curse my name on public streets" is a good line, however, the one that follows makes me think of obscene phone calls.
Pretty damn good.
King Diamond wouldn't wipe his bum with this poeme.
HE'D USE IT FOR LYRICS IN HIS NEXT EPIC CONCEPT ALBUM LOL
This is quite good, I suppose.