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==Doylum replying on Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer 13 Feb 2003, 3:53 PM
just logged on again to see what people have said, i'll keep on logging on and logging on and logging on and logging on and logging on logging on and logging on and logging on and logging on and logging on, de you get it yet?
==Doylum replying on Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer 13 Feb 2003, 3:51 PM
No please explain some more!
god'swife replying on Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer 13 Feb 2003, 2:32 PM
Home-made I presume. Such expense ingredients for an undergrad. Care to swap recipes? I have make a mince-meat pie people just 'die' for, if you get my meaning... Hey OneFinger, what if he uses a gun, knife, poison, etc. Does the bird still come out of it singing?
lunar on Past by Dostoyevsky 13 Feb 2003, 2:31 PM
very lovely i like the wording-i did post that poem i showed u by the way
Ok, so I took a few looks and I think this is entertaining and interesting. It has some small problems, you proboably should re-write this as many times as it takes to get it right. I like the verses, and, with the exception of the fourth verse, find them easily understood. But why are theye speaking in rhyme? It doesn't make sense to me. I especially like the hopefullness at the end, symbolized by a big smile- very Dickens. You lefting wanting to know more about the fate of these innocent souls. Write me another chapter.
<~> replying on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig 13 Feb 2003, 2:11 PM
we travelled around a lot. and drank ale a lot.
<~> replying on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig 13 Feb 2003, 2:10 PM
see what comes of too much ale? i can't remember where we ate in york, then. we stayed at lancaster university. there was a pub in town called the penny barrel, or the penny bank, or something...
==Doylum replying on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig 13 Feb 2003, 2:03 PM
Thats Bradistan not York!
<~> replying on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig 13 Feb 2003, 1:58 PM
i don't recall. i had so many good ales. we lunched at the black bull in haworth. good beer. good jacket potatoes.
==Doylum replying on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig 13 Feb 2003, 1:38 PM
b-l-a-c-k S-h-e-e-p----------------------?
razorgrin on Dairy Dreams by OneFingerAnswer 13 Feb 2003, 1:27 PM
true.
==Doylum replying on Languageing by ==Doylum 13 Feb 2003, 1:25 PM
Come again?
==Doylum replying on Dairy Dreams by OneFingerAnswer 13 Feb 2003, 1:24 PM
No you don't
==Doylum replying on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig 13 Feb 2003, 1:23 PM
why did this end up down here when it was supposed to be up there? Sort it nentwhinger.
razorgrin replying on Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer 13 Feb 2003, 1:22 PM
I appreciate it. have some cookies, they're made with the souls of the damned and sugar.
razorgrin on The Blooding by Mr Pig 13 Feb 2003, 1:21 PM
impressive images.
==Doylum replying on Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer 13 Feb 2003, 1:20 PM
and i was calling anuspickingringfinger a romaplegicromcocking bumwagon driver
<~> replying on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig 13 Feb 2003, 1:19 PM
d-r-i-n-k-i-n-g a-l-e.
razorgrin replying on Dairy Dreams by OneFingerAnswer 13 Feb 2003, 1:19 PM
no, what? no, you can't or no, you can?
==Doylum replying on Dairy Dreams by OneFingerAnswer 13 Feb 2003, 1:15 PM
No