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lunar replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar 4 Feb 2003, 2:38 PM
yeah and i like it but it still doesnt feel right if you know what i mean! this is my favorite poem i will have another play with it-give me time! im just in a different frame of mind to when i wrote it-so much has changed!
lrig a mi eehet ekil like tehee i'm a girl...sadly though, no stereotypical valley girl in middle school or high school EVER seemed to figure it out. what good is genius if no one understands it?
brazen replying on 42 by brazen 4 Feb 2003, 2:31 PM
douglas adams is a hitchiker?? this shall be your first clue
brazen replying on 42 by brazen 4 Feb 2003, 2:30 PM
why, 42 is merely the answer to the question of life, the universe, and everything. now, if we only knew what the question was...
god'swife replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar 4 Feb 2003, 2:28 PM
Copy my version, it belongs to you. I wrote it in the spirit of your feelings, I'm just older and more experienced than you is all. It was you all along who brought the idea forward. I just edited it. Sometimes other writers can help us express what we feel, there's no shame in that. Take it, it belongs to you, i'll delete my edit. This happens all the time.
brazen replying on The Kansas City Chiefs suck by Jeremi B. Handrinos 4 Feb 2003, 2:25 PM
sorry, i stopped watching the news the day after 9/11...that was the day the media finally pissed me off so much that i told them i hate them and fled off to california with my hippy lover leaving them to wonder what they ever did wrong. having said that...yeah, makes a lot more sense now
lunar replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar 4 Feb 2003, 2:11 PM
i have tried to re-edit it but not posted it coz i dont wanna copy ur version of it but i cant seem to shape the words any better than this! this poem means a lot to me and i dont want to destroy the feelings i had when i wrote it.
That is very true- it applies to everything i say i am a fan because i base my life ont he teachings of the simpsons and belive everything it says! also all my knowledge of america is from there! dark angel would be surprised that around here many ppl are completly clueless on the simpsons!
Shardik on A Short Letter by Ranger 4 Feb 2003, 1:28 PM
Wasn't Byron lame and portly? Don't get me started on Chaucer.
Yank? You couldn't sound more like an idiot, or be any further from the truth. Utter shite? shock? If i want to shock someone, i shock... it's that simple really, Algeron, you dissapoint in every way imaginable.
Have you seen the Secretary? There are a couple of typos, but overall... i felt a connection to the piece.
You know very little of the flesh trade. you are forgiven, and since i am retired now (three years) i will just say this. If you are a well enough endowed and a good looking young man, people will pay an outrageous amount of money to suck you off (1,000.00$ for an all nighter), to put you in control of them, to bath in your youthful glow and strength. Not the other way around, twit. Unless of course the money's right, and that's a high figure, and a trust issue of course... The male hustler has been around for 1,000's and 1,000's of years, and there's nothing wrong with a young goodlooking orphan using the field as a way to educate, assimulate, and contemplate the layers of life. As long as you obey the twelve rules of hustling, all will be well. So no, the only cum i drink is my own, during certain rituals. thanks for your support and time listening. You think you are well informed, but unfortunately my friend... You're not.
I take it that you did not read about the eighteen year old young man in Kansas who was jettisoned 40 feet from his vehicle up into the telephone lines. Where he hung for twenty minutes until he was rescued?
razorgrin on What the runes said by INTRANSIT 4 Feb 2003, 11:03 AM
That's an odd coincidence, ==doylum. I was just watching Bill & Ted's excellent adventure. I like the freud jokes best.
razorgrin on The Grapes of Wrath by ==Doylum 4 Feb 2003, 11:00 AM
bumtastic.
<~> replying on poemrancour by JakeBike 4 Feb 2003, 10:45 AM
did you mean tip top of the moron, darling?
<~> replying on Me and My Girl by NinjaPoet 4 Feb 2003, 10:43 AM
would i lie to you, speedy d? i have missed you so!!!
razorgrin on Feeling by chicka_babe05 4 Feb 2003, 10:34 AM
"state of selfhood"? What the hell is that supposed to mean? Seriously, though, your eloquent and moving use of "you" to rhyme with "you" shall surely put you solidly into our grand poetic tradition. You may even dethrone shakespeare! One thing, though: wouldn't the touch of someone's eyes be all squishy and gooey? Not to mention painful for the other person. Lastly, leave God out of this poeme. I asked the big guy, YH-to-the-VH about you and he said, "Never heard of her." Then he fell back asleep. However, the archangel Jibreel did say that you deserve a zero for this lump of solidified porcupine smegma. Who am I to defy divine will