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replying on Hermes Trigamestus (was not a monk edit) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Feb 2003, 4:23 PM
what are the 12 rules of hustling? please?
Chopped it off, do you mean the end?, because the more i read it the more it does sound a little upbrupt. Any insight into it would be good. I'll let you use it...Cheers.
Thanx..
Very nicely put....Thanx for that!
Why can't all my poems be about love?..I'm glad people have the ability to write about other things that they find worthy, but there is no law that says that someone has to cover every aspect of life in their writings...it would be like telling Stephen King to write a mills and boon book because you don't like reading horror. I appreciate your comment, but i'm a sentimentalist and don't see myself changing anytime soon...
how sad :(
idea... make the poemranker pointer selection hand a middle finger, but only for those with poemwanker awards and me and da.
not bad
ok, "?"
OneFingerAnswer
replying on The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer
4 Feb 2003, 3:00 PM
Honestly I'm not sure. Each stanza is a 5-7-5 but it's all meant to be read together. I don't know if each one is a Haiku or if the whole thing collectively is a Haiku. I just wrote the thing. :P
a lonely man with what appears to be nacho cheese hanging from his beard and yamuca? is kind of clapping from the second tier upper left... can you see him. he liked it... he thinks you have talent... his name is chip, he went to art school too. i think he fancies you? he's consistantly the only one that comes to your shows... save me of course, but that's just how i show you my inner feelings and sole. hug me. 10!
GOLDEN Q -TIP AWARDE INRETROSPECTIVE IRRELEVENCE AND FUNGUS CONTROL... ON THIS FINE DAY IN CHIRTLE DIRP WURP WURP..<brought to you by 'stridox' howe to make ox shit work for your face and 'Lemming' what the fuck? why not jump?>
Why sir, do you make me need a shower. bye. now i must vaccuum. everything. again. AGAIN! you know what i've fond? the process of compulsive cleaning helps my sole cope with time and kale and being a secret agent. It's wholesome good clean fun. whoops gotta to go... the dryer just chirped.
i didn't even realize that these were all seperate haikus...i should really start paying attention to...eh, huh?
I'll will have you refer to my pinata as the lonedisco29andahalf. Thankthee... to correct thyself lest we be forced to empty scabbarde and DANCE THE GAYE BLADE! urp.
OneFingerAnswer
replying on An Ode to the professor, but not Marianne by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Feb 2003, 2:46 PM
Drow is also a type of elf known to be particularly nasty. They usually live deep underground and rarely come out.
Is a radioactive smurf forced underwater a snork?
Chuckey cheese, where a kid can be a kid.
OneFingerAnswer
replying on An Ode to the professor, but not Marianne by Jeremi B. Handrinos
4 Feb 2003, 2:44 PM
How can you be offended by nonsense?
most notable correction i have to make is to change 'coal' to 'lead', for i'm sure it was a reference to the alchemy in the stanza before it, and alchemy was originally the science of changing lead to gold. i'll leave any other errors to the ranking public