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<{Baba^Yaga}> on The yellow rose of California by INTRANSIT 20 Jan 2003, 11:17 AM

BY far your best, do you concure? lol.

<{Baba^Yaga}> on Blustered by INTRANSIT 20 Jan 2003, 11:14 AM

The title should be 'what is inevitable', that being...well..nudity Acould title might be Fall, Fall promotes nudity..how about Ms. Autumn was naked? I GOT IT..STRIPPING TREES... ahh fuck it the last toothpick??

<{Baba^Yaga}> on And uncle sam says... by INTRANSIT 20 Jan 2003, 11:11 AM

My *'sediments' lol. exactly. * Busheunism.

<{Baba^Yaga}> on Rich and the wall by INTRANSIT 20 Jan 2003, 11:06 AM

<welcome to five poems on the John with, Baba, this morning we will be featuring the poetry of mechanical operators turned introspective...Welcome INTRANSIT...INS. sits squashing one of Baba's lounge chairs, and toppling over his pre-established mixed drink, he mumbles.."sorry..i like colorful umbrellas" no worries my 10-4 buddy..i am featuring you this morning outside of the 'hut', because well...i like you, and your scribblings...lets take a look, shall we? great limerick..ah enlightening? lol. 9.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on The Corte de Bleu by GregDeEgg 20 Jan 2003, 10:23 AM

What? The shallots... bear no hair? GOOD GOD!!!!! WHAT FOUL RESTAURANT UNKNOWN TO MAN WAS THIS AT?

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Charlottesville by New Life Drug 20 Jan 2003, 10:17 AM

Hot tamales, yeah they're red hot. Yeah! She got 'em for sale!!1

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Immortalised by singingsoul 20 Jan 2003, 10:14 AM

No mercy for what we are doing. No thought to even what we have done. We don't need to feel the sorrow. No remorse for the helpless one. (War without end) NO REMORSE NO REPENT WE DON'T CARE WHAT IT MEANT ANOTHER DAY ANOTHER DEATH ANOTHER SORROW ANOTHER BREATH SHALL I PUT THE KETTLE ON?

New Life Drug replying on Charlottesville by New Life Drug 20 Jan 2003, 10:11 AM

AH. The lightning wasn't torn.. It was the sky FROM the lightning. That's what I meant. oops. And another correction would be "barely said A word" not I word. oooooook. hey I'm 14 now. wooohoo!

<~> replying on blues by <~> 20 Jan 2003, 8:49 AM

emotion, salt water. eyes.

Christof replying on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 20 Jan 2003, 8:28 AM

Interesting... maybe you should just take the word 'truth' at face value here!

cleverdevice replying on The Chastisement of Cupid by Thyme 20 Jan 2003, 8:19 AM

Either that or Matthew Kelly.

Ranger replying on Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 20 Jan 2003, 8:12 AM

81% vilanelle! Love it! "Reception bellington", wonderful...here have a nine, this rocks!

<~> on The Chastisement of Cupid by Thyme 20 Jan 2003, 7:47 AM

vivid and corporeal! was it inspired by a painting?

<~> replying on Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 20 Jan 2003, 7:20 AM

exactly my point, Goode Sir!

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 20 Jan 2003, 7:05 AM

"IRONSHOE" wasn't anything like a villanelle. "Dr. Skellington" is 81% a villanelle.

<~> on Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 20 Jan 2003, 6:57 AM

why call it a villanelle when it's not? you've played that trick once already. it's not as funny the second time around. but i like the poem.

<~> replying on Trials of life haikus by <{Baba^Yaga}> 20 Jan 2003, 6:55 AM

GO BEARS!!!

razorgrin on Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 20 Jan 2003, 6:43 AM

Necromantically delicious.10.

INTRANSIT on Mooseknuckle MacFoofingtons by Bachus 20 Jan 2003, 6:39 AM

The underlying story is killer. My favorite kind of truth.

INTRANSIT on Trials of life haikus by <{Baba^Yaga}> 20 Jan 2003, 6:35 AM

GO rillas? I'd like to watch the olympics, but what happens when the gorillas turn the tables?