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<~> on 'Fucky Fucky 5 Dollar' by scitz 15 Jan 2003, 10:18 AM
obviously, you had either been served quite a few when you wrote this, or were so deranged from want of drink, that this was like a DT revelation for you. funny story, but what did you learn from the experience? except, of course, how to go both ways? snoggity snog snog.
Tintagiles replying on Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin 15 Jan 2003, 10:18 AM
I'll have the great joy of spending the afternoon in Sociology. I can't believe that was all there was left for me to take. On the other hand, it's a huge class, and all the notes are on the Net, and we already have the final exam, so I may just write throughout it.
razorgrin replying on Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin 15 Jan 2003, 10:11 AM
Thank you. i'm now into week 2 with very little sleep. This and cookies are all I have left. And Deviance class. I may submit these for credit, if I can.
Tintagiles on Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin 15 Jan 2003, 10:08 AM
You are a sick sick sick little girl. On the other hand, as we all know, that's why I loves you. I don't think this is my favourite set, but lovely nonetheless. (Well... lovely... you know what I mean.)
razorgrin on -=Dark_Angel=- RAP by poemwanker 15 Jan 2003, 10:02 AM
no amount of hottie big-booty fly girls can save this piece of shoe-scraping.
horus8 replying on The blue light special. by Jeremi B. Handrinos 15 Jan 2003, 10:00 AM
a limerick, not always, need do that.
horus8 on -=Dark_Angel=- RAP by poemwanker 15 Jan 2003, 9:57 AM
my favorite part was when his homies just laughed, and when they stole his spleen, but since you already have a lovely zero. let like attract like, and carry you to the worst list.
Nicholas Monson replying on HATTIE by Nicholas Monson 15 Jan 2003, 9:51 AM
Dear Caducus, Glad you liked Hattie. Have you checked out Cecelia and Maria? I have seen your verses before and I do remember liking them. I will get right into checking out more and giving comment (for what value it may have). Adieu
Robert K Foster on A Short Letter by Ranger 15 Jan 2003, 9:45 AM
nit witty, but succinct. bravo.
just a song i wrote for dark angel, that's all...don't you know someone who has a g3 or g4 mac? then you could download the 53 song library and shake your booty, shake your booty, baby...gonna get your groove on.
tremendously brave and reverent (sorry)...downright boy scouty, i must say!
razorgrin replying on perversions 2: the revenge by razorgrin 15 Jan 2003, 9:42 AM
Thanks.As some may guess, i plan on making a series of these.
last line should rhyme with the first two.
Robert K Foster on Bobjim, Jimbob by Spider-Man 15 Jan 2003, 9:41 AM
knob? Also, I'm seeing a pattern here of people making fun of one another. I hope its all in good fun.
very nicely done. bravo and two shakes.
what's that on your nose? mascarpone?
razorgrin on Fuck by Bobjim 15 Jan 2003, 9:39 AM
boo! your kung-fu is no match for mine, jimmy-ma-bobbo. eat the pickle.
Robert K Foster on Jockey by betty swallox 15 Jan 2003, 9:38 AM
a bit wordy--it muddles up the pace.
1)Ashton Kirchner is that idiot from that seventies show, and the movie dude where's my car. 2)Michael Bulgakov, 'was' a famous russian writer and scholar. 3) kind of, i just wanted to show you my new angel defeatherer.
Robert K Foster on Cat by Topaz Servias 15 Jan 2003, 9:38 AM
Limericks use the distinctive rhyming scheme of a-a-b-b-a, where the first two lines set the scene, the third and fourth lines quickly twist things about, and the fifth line hammers the conclusion. (first, second, and fifth lines are trimeter, third and fourth are dimeter). this is from the help screen, not my original writing. Limericks focus on the absurd or the silly when they're not downright naughty.