Bobjim
replying on Fuck by Bobjim
15 Jan 2003, 5:26 AM
It is complete! You ignorant fool! Of course it is only 4 long! Otherwise it would just be stupid.
What the fuck? Who is that?
liked the 'carry on' film references to your ideas of the 2 types of people, and you wove the end quite nicely, not really my shot of vodka but still liked downing it in one. Your work is always polished i'll give you that Mr J. *8*
boring compared to the other 2 i just commented on, but then i again i dont really get it. -5-
Makes me think of a depeche mode song, 'and i dont want to start any blasphemous rumours but i think that god has a sick sense of humour and when i die i expect to find him laughing' -liked the end of this and the ideas behind it, you have your own little world full of overpopulated thoughts - cool -8
Awesome poem it reeks of grief and your perception of the world, the irony, the injustified fate of life, the weakness of mortality and the decadence of frustration, sarcasm, boredom, the ending is a crescendo of turmoil- I fucking loved this have a 9, i am off to pound my head against a corkscrew listening to 'everbody hurts'
Awww, likkle Jimbo's pissed off... UP YOURS, MUTHA FUCKA!
I'm in a university library. I'll probably be thrown out for displaying that many obscenities.
Did you paste, or write each one by hand. Sixpence a week for cheek, Mr. Morel!
Bobjim
replying on Clever Device? This is how you hunt angels with an Ashton Kirchner dude where's my car tattoo and legos by horus8
15 Jan 2003, 3:12 AM
Shut up.
Wow. Your ryming jim with jim....
shows how much talent you have.
Have I offended you? If so, it was purely intentional. Fuck off and die you stinking piece of crap.
Could you please change it to 'know my piano'? please?
Good, untill the last line, which I read as a mistake futhur and thoght it siad 'Know my piano' that woulda been hilarious.
cleverdevice
on Clever Device? This is how you hunt angels with an Ashton Kirchner dude where's my car tattoo and legos by horus8
15 Jan 2003, 2:34 AM
Excuse my ignorance, who is Aston Kirchner? And again, excuse my ignorance, what's Michael Bulgakov done that reletes to me at all?
Besides that, is this in reply to 'Ode to Dark Angel' Or my dream involving you?