Quite sweet, a good effort much better than celebrating yourself here is a 7

If you find your way out of your own ass heres your vote.......2

I wouldn't say this is particularly poignant or heart wrenching but its faily well told and from the heart so a worthy 7, i too have written of loss (a lot)

You will indeedy

Someone once told me that I look like General Custer. But I don't have the 'tache!

Nice work-4th line from last is very good! 8

suxor my coxor

about time that electrical hair took over again.

"My life consists of homework, meal preparation and recreation (like poemranker)." (like poemranker)->(like the discus). That's a bit funnier I think.

I thought you were gonna replace it with something else. I'm amazed you've turned this into such a masterpiece. I especially like how you took my obnoxious "I don't care bit" and said "I don't care that Jesus was a male Hustler. I don't care".

I mean fucking come on, "flitting from shadow to shadow"? The drama imagery at the ends sucks shit and the only good line in this is "rough" and the two after it don't make any sense. Just fucking start over and make it worthwhile. THINK OF THE POINT FIRST AND GO FROM THERE.