Ranger
on Morning on Galapados by Mikius
7 Jan 2003, 1:46 AM
2nd to last verse is excellent, I like it a great deal.
Not sure about the last line, if I can think of anything better for it I'll let you know.
Only other gripe is that 'fresh' doesn't have an 'a'.
Good work
skinflint.
Phoenix.
Thanks. :o) I haven't been posting here lately, and never really met other poets on here. :o)
This is very nice, it really got to me...beautiful and sad, very sweet. 9
This one's for you, Bobjim.
0
4!!??!! How can you give this four? Arrgghh, this deserves less than zero...but sadly minus fifteen doesn't exist as a vote...this should take its rightful place in the bottom.
0. And a more emphatic ZERO!
Ho ho hum ho heh.
8 for the laugh.
It sure do.
Hnur hnur hnur.
You missed the bit where you fall over and it snaps.
And the bit where the dog thinks it's a sausage and...you know the rest.
Here's a 9 for making me laugh!
Can't help but visualise the corking effect, have a 7
Can't help but visualise the corking effect, have a 7
How about a new one: 'Shitewalker'?
You know, I always wondered what Settle would be like if he lacked talent, style or originality. 4
Intersting, I wonder whom you are talking about. man-with-pants
I have seen the murky line
On which your soul will twine
Sandwhich is what you wanted right?
Dirty room like the twilight.
nitty gritty.