-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
replying on Solitude by Owner of the Sky
7 Jan 2003, 6:52 AM
That's ok, Owner of the Sky! This is a friendly community and we welcome newcomers! Poemeranker is a great place to meet other Christians and share in fellowship!
1st class,, the opening stanza is original in description,(at least I think so) giving this a rare 9 and a 2nd read
I rate this highly for its expressiveness and melodrama, its in the same vein as stuff tintagiles writes have an 8 well done
Deliciously disturbing 7
Hi trisha welcome to p/r. I found upon reading this that i was forced to empathize with you and I wanted to see this from a less generic and more personal point of view, try and engage the emotion you want to write about and express it in a more ethereal way.
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I'll see your shark and raise you
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Ah - the old post-Christmas depression? This has intensity yet comedy. I hope it is not too autobiographical.
Wassaapppp?
Yes
Hur hur hur
*crackle* KILLER WHALE AT SIX 'O' CLOCK, REPEAT, KILLER WHALE AT SIX...AAAARRRRGGGHHHHH
What a flow of concept indeed!10!
Marvelous!very nice!a poem with a real content and proper words to influence!really enjoyed!the 3rd stanza is a wonder!(Really!)10
I like this.
I've known Blade for 5 years...he referred me to this site...I see him every day at college...he's one of my best friends...I shattered his porcelain fangs and replaced them with chewing gum...I've voted 0 for all of his poems...how much more do you need to know?
great. have an 8.
This is nice. However, I still can't see the difference between free verse and prose with extra spaces. Will somebody please enlighten me?!?
A shitload of anonymous votes!
Or perhaps, 'It sure is'?
Is that to me?
Should I give him a 5? Ok.