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<~> replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar 19 Dec 2002, 1:49 PM
p.s. don't believe him when he tells you he plays naked volleyball. he never takes of that old-fashioned striped tanktop swimsuit of his, not even to shower!
<~> replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar 19 Dec 2002, 1:47 PM
how long have you been on this site, lunar? go on, piss somebody off. watch overnight as you get loaded down with zeros. i saw it happen to p&k and it happened to me as well. i used to have 5 in the top 15, then my fanclub ousted me overnight. as for whether or not p&k is an ass, well, he is arrogant but honest. and a lot of people can't handle the truth, especially when it is delivered point blank with a sledge hammer and a vodka chaser. he's really an old softie, although he wouldn't want that let out. he looks like basil rathbone as sherlock holmes, in his tweeds, smoking his pipe, grading papers.... such a character! and horus wants to pummel him! oy!
lunar replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar 19 Dec 2002, 1:42 PM
yes ive been there of course it seemed quite vast and empty, boiling hot with a lifeless lake in the middle. But you are right it was incredible to look at, but you must agree it is empty relative to the amount of objects/people in it.
lunar replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar 19 Dec 2002, 1:39 PM
Dont insult me then say 'sorry' for then there was no point in the insult. Of course you are going to think your poems are fine since you wrote them. My poem has merit to myself and if it means something to me surely that makes it valid enough to post.
poetandknowit replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar 19 Dec 2002, 1:31 PM
My poems are quite fine. You could learn something from reading them. Get a clue. People do not like me because they cannot accept criticism whether valid or simply verbally harsh (usually given when the attempted poem bears absolutely no merit, like yours). Sorry.
lunar on Caged World by deep-as-a-puddle 19 Dec 2002, 1:29 PM
i like this a lot better than your other one coz of its randomness! some of the lines are very well written too. I dont really understand it tho! xx
lunar on Misplaced admoration by deep-as-a-puddle 19 Dec 2002, 1:27 PM
This doesnt really make sense, plus it does seem you have changed to make it rhyme but i do quite like it but its not really the type of poem i relate to! xx
poetandknowit replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar 19 Dec 2002, 1:26 PM
Have you ever been to Death Valley? It is far from empty. It is quite a lovely place. The shear vastness of it. Do not use western America in your putrid examples. It is as beautiful place as there is, desert or no desert.
lunar replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar 19 Dec 2002, 1:24 PM
people do not like you because you are evil but surely it is the quality of your poems that matters mostly comparative to what mark they give you. you cannot go round with the dillusion that people give you bad marks because they do not like you, maybe it is the quality of your poems that induces the bad marks?
lunar replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar 19 Dec 2002, 1:20 PM
Ahh poetandknowit may have a clever name but his mind is as empty as Death Valley. It depends on the type of love also-it is not the love that brings suffering but when the love goes wrong normally.
poetandknowit replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar 19 Dec 2002, 1:19 PM
Will you please use the English language correctly? I do not have 10s because people do not like me. So they give me zeros. It is all they have in the virtual sense to retaliate.
Bachus on UltraSound by UnityMitford 19 Dec 2002, 1:18 PM
congradulations! sorry for horus's comment it came out wrong he mumbles out loud..see it's like this sometimes you read something and instantaneously you subconciously mutter things symbols something flashes in your head then its out, and because recently he was involved intimately in some of those symbol flashes he might of thought you wrote the piece towards his situation in a good way, and he was just responding as if he had been asked a question, and then it came out like that.......i know everything will be well with you and yours i give you my blessing and love in a sentence. You are a wonderfull person, healthy and good. You will be a loving and teaching parent, and you are already..you have our best wishes and true love and faith and respect pulling for you and yours this holiday season..yours truly, Bachus, horus and Baba. So mote it be. because it is. have a ten for your picture and your sound.y
poetandknowit replying on UltraSound by UnityMitford 19 Dec 2002, 1:17 PM
I do not have a screen play.
lunar replying on Xmas gifts list by lunar 19 Dec 2002, 1:17 PM
well thanks Gods wife for the help and mr/s poetandknowit will have to wait and see for my next poem and see what you think if that keeping in mind that none of your poems have all got 10s so it is not as though u are the most perfect poem writer.
<~> replying on UltraSound by UnityMitford 19 Dec 2002, 1:01 PM
your email's broken. again.
UnityMitford replying on UltraSound by UnityMitford 19 Dec 2002, 1:00 PM
only if i can read yours.
poetandknowit replying on UltraSound by UnityMitford 19 Dec 2002, 12:12 PM
Hey, Unity can I read your screenplay?
UnityMitford replying on UltraSound by UnityMitford 19 Dec 2002, 12:04 PM
that is a shame, h. sorry. now you and P&K stop fighting and get along like good little boyz.
poetandknowit replying on UltraSound by UnityMitford 19 Dec 2002, 11:54 AM
I was in LA yesterday. At the Stillwell. Meetings and money begging.
horus8 replying on UltraSound by UnityMitford 19 Dec 2002, 11:51 AM
karma balance?..okay mr. zen abacus karma police. did you go to the front door or the back, and name one feature about this place that satood out from the houses around it 'twilight zone theme music' beerneenerner. welcome to the karma zone.