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Limness replying on Danse by Limness 11 Dec 2002, 7:50 PM
what would be better? 'whirl'? 'are caught in its sway'? i am open to suggestion; this was a fast write, and will change, no doubt. the first line is a decade old; the rest is changed. so, speak...
thank god the title isn't better than the haiku, and i thought he did already. they shold have a mutton burger called the mcbleet. the second line is humorous. what kind of vreature is the grimace? exactly.r
some deleted user on Danse by Limness 11 Dec 2002, 7:40 PM
I agree w/ him, and sighed at everything except the very last line, which made teh poem cheaper somehow. Not the sentiment expressed, but the wording. thus, nine.
horus8 on A hard life by INTRANSIT 11 Dec 2002, 7:34 PM
possibly, holding more meaning than an incubus song.d
horus8 on Danse by Limness 11 Dec 2002, 7:33 PM
okay.a
horus8 on THE MISSING HEART by Prince of Void 11 Dec 2002, 7:31 PM
tron and birdes are fun and beys? well what can i says? they are always fabulous with portebellos and bacon.b
i would end after ejaculated, dal.n
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Die by little_angel_maria 11 Dec 2002, 6:51 PM
more contemporary prattle.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on love by little_angel_maria 11 Dec 2002, 6:49 PM
the best part was the snog, and than you went no where with it...shame really.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on non-recipient love prose by xanthippe 11 Dec 2002, 6:47 PM
lovely..all of the good nouns are simply symbolic.
<{Baba^Yaga}> replying on Sparks, until Sunvalley. by <{Baba^Yaga}> 11 Dec 2002, 6:35 PM
tommy should put his peter in the cement along with his post motley crue fucking smirk...residuals and royalties must be nice...god knows he hasn't done shit since but tape himself banging skanky bay watch trim, and try to rap.
<{Baba^Yaga}> replying on Sparks, until Sunvalley. by <{Baba^Yaga}> 11 Dec 2002, 6:29 PM
could you not use my little 'moments' in time for your befouling attempts at sluttery? i'm trying to have a moment with davy crocket here damnit.
<{Baba^Yaga}> replying on Sparks, until Sunvalley. by <{Baba^Yaga}> 11 Dec 2002, 6:24 PM
funny story 'confessional actually' don winger and his brother's hand prints and names are right outside my front door on the sidewalk...ha!1!ha1HA!HAAA!!!isn't that hilarious?! WINGER! HA! HA! HA!! remember that kid on beavis And but head show with the winger shirt wasn't that the pre-bobby bobby from king of the hill...what am i talkingh about again? ah yeah WINGER! HA! HAAAAA! HA!
<~> replying on Sparks, until Sunvalley. by <{Baba^Yaga}> 11 Dec 2002, 6:20 PM
i like colby cheddar.
<~> replying on Sparks, until Sunvalley. by <{Baba^Yaga}> 11 Dec 2002, 6:18 PM
maybe they are caught up in a game of resident evil 0, and that's why they don't call. maybe they still haven't defeated the masters in zelda: occarina of time. maybe they're still playing space invaders, DAMMIT!!!! oh, and i don't know where he lives, zackly.
<{Baba^Yaga}> replying on Sparks, until Sunvalley. by <{Baba^Yaga}> 11 Dec 2002, 6:16 PM
are you in culver city? i'll buy you a beer.. i'm bored anyway. and i will have you know i am to viggo mortenson what pretty is to a chunk of colby cheddar.
<{Baba^Yaga}> replying on Sparks, until Sunvalley. by <{Baba^Yaga}> 11 Dec 2002, 6:11 PM
i hate x-mas, and all this fucking waiting..I WANT A JOB! I WANT A JOB! i want to feed my fish god damnit. i want a joint...why won't they call? will they call..they should just fucking call, CALL, CALL CALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i did a good job damnit why wont the phone ring????ringie dingie dingie RING!!!!!!!!!!is he in culver city?
Snails are interesting. One should try them at least once in one's life. But I confess one couldn't take too much at a time. Sort of like snake.
<{Baba^Yaga}> replying on Sparks, until Sunvalley. by <{Baba^Yaga}> 11 Dec 2002, 6:07 PM
unfortunately, there will be no drawings of my mother's scissors. i do get free food from boston market. are you in culver city? what at the airport? pinball is arguably better than sex occasionally. i know everything dies, my hair looks nothing like superman. no, i'm not fucking happy DAMNIT! south parks on tonight though, and ha! made you say coeleco!? what else? oh yeah..sony studios is in culver city, why are you?
INTRANSIT on A Pirate's Sonnet by snacktime 11 Dec 2002, 5:46 PM
Looks good to me.