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Another Bobjim?!?! on im going by little_angel_maria 8 Dec 2002, 12:10 PM
Good idea, I wish you better luck than I.
Bachus on A BACHUS MAN A MANY by Garrett S Sexton 8 Dec 2002, 12:08 PM
Quit looking in the mirror, yurn around. i'm behind you in the window. blade. then again i heard you had a good voice..perhap we'llcall you sade..yes sade it is...where's my precious we wants it we needs it GIVES ITS TO US!
poetandknowit replying on route nine by Bill Z Bub 8 Dec 2002, 10:04 AM
You reduce many subjects to their erotic foundations, find cock and tits in many a subtext, set yourself up through poetry and comments as a sexual object, and then cry foul (i.e. call me the lonely old bastard) when you are treated as such. It is a bore and makes me think you are merely a one-dimensional thinker.
David on going by slipping 8 Dec 2002, 8:16 AM
Very good.
David on InCumBent by slipping 8 Dec 2002, 8:05 AM
Ouch! I just woke-up, and this poem has cast a gloom over my morning. I'll be thinking about this all day.
Sounds like a nice day out.Asprin protects you.All i got is this ring.IT'S MINE!ALL MINE.YOU WAN'T IT,HAH CAN'T HAVE IT,MINE SEE HAH.THE POWER!GREED,HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAH!STILL MINE!HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH.GOOD POEM THOUGHHAHAHAHHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA LORD OF YOUR RING ME ISHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAGO AWAY IT'S MINE HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAYOU CAN'T HAVE ITHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
Garrett S Sexton replying on edgar a's raven by Garrett S Sexton 8 Dec 2002, 2:36 AM
Bachus you are a fool, a bastard is that born out of wedlock.go look silly somewhere else!
Bill Z Bub on She Puts The Fun In Funeral by David 7 Dec 2002, 11:15 PM
I like it, but it feels unfinished.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on route nine by Bill Z Bub 7 Dec 2002, 10:56 PM
Also, it should have been "an Angel=-, no matter how -=Dark_"
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on route nine by Bill Z Bub 7 Dec 2002, 10:55 PM
Sorry d00d, it's a one-time offer only.
Bill Z Bub replying on route nine by Bill Z Bub 7 Dec 2002, 10:53 PM
Outwardly I may be humble, but deep inside I'm awash with arrogance. As all writers must be?
Bill Z Bub replying on missing time by Bill Z Bub 7 Dec 2002, 10:44 PM
Aw shucks, y'all are makin me blush.
Dreammaker1024 on Mi Virgin De Guadalupe by slipping 7 Dec 2002, 7:30 PM
Really Beautiful.
god'swife replying on route nine by Bill Z Bub 7 Dec 2002, 6:38 PM
A friend in need is a friend indeed, but I'm not the any-port-in-a-storm kind. Thanks for the offer, but I don't like the idea of an Angel no matter how Daek, picking the flesh off my dead dream. I'll just put her on the compost heap along with all the others; keep her little shoes in a box for a keepsake. See, you've already helped. Can I have a rain-check, just in case? For I reckon that the sufferings of this present time are not worthy to be compared with the glory which shall be revealed in us. Romans 8:18.
Bachus on Osmosis on Parade by David 7 Dec 2002, 5:58 PM
sound like how i got good at everything i do too...and why they call your left hand mr. kalamazoo.
debased on She Puts The Fun In Funeral by David 7 Dec 2002, 5:48 PM
if this chicks real she is so cool /9
Bachus on Ex In Bonds by OneFingerAnswer 7 Dec 2002, 5:43 PM
that's the problem with chick see.. that's why i like the chickity chickity chaw of my turn tables and the flash of the disco ball, and cocaine and tube tops more now..me and beck are midnite vultures.
Bachus on Woke Up by brazen 7 Dec 2002, 5:41 PM
still charming.
Bachus on journey to being the top rapper by kliq 7 Dec 2002, 5:38 PM
hee hee, tee tee..chicky chaw do we we.
Bachus on Snake Oil by Quarton 7 Dec 2002, 5:37 PM
that was fun..i could smell the dust from the road and horse shit from the salesman wagon..